May 25th, 2009 at 11:05pm
Let The Barriers Go - Comments
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I love the story, it's fantastic. love wentz.February 28th, 2009 at 10:32am
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This is actually really good, I like this chapter, if you abandon it tell me who that dude was XDD and of course im gonna comment every chapter were like practically online bffs! Or we were at one time...I think we still are altho I am not sure but anywho byeeeeeFebruary 28th, 2009 at 02:25am
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This is actually really good, I like this chapter, if you abandon it tell me who that dude was XDD and of course im gonna comment every chapter were like practically online bffs! Or we were at one time...I think we still are altho I am not sure but anywho byeeeeeFebruary 28th, 2009 at 02:25am
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no! this story isnt a shit! its a wonderful one! more please!February 25th, 2009 at 03:34pm
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OMJ its awesome!!! don't kill it i love Crayon too much!! haha i like this little smiley face!! ---> XD sorry. random. anyway the story is awesome! PLEASE keep it going!February 8th, 2009 at 07:27pm
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I lovee that chapter! Its reallly good!January 24th, 2009 at 03:46am
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I like it! It is really good and I was thinking, maybe the ending could go something like they are seniors in high school, he gets into a different college than her, but then when he is on the way he realises he loves her more than anything and comes back for her and asks her to marry him or perhaps he could get into a car accident and come very close to dying, and end a chapter where it looks like he did die but then he didnt, and he ends up being ok and then skip a few years and they get married, OR she gets kidnapped and someone almost kills her but then she is ok and he saves her
Just helping, I figured maybe this could help you brainstorm, I just got over my writers block and I figured I would share a bit of my muse with you :D if you dont like the ideas its TOTALLY cool but just putting them out thereJanuary 20th, 2009 at 05:51am -
Oooo! Uhh-Mazingg!
Loverrs It!
=3January 17th, 2009 at 12:43am -
OMG i finished the whole thing and its AMAZING you are suchh a good writer! Ryan is amazingg and I notived something about a week ago and this story proved it even more...I never like people named Niki, theres about 5 Nikkis that i dont like not including this one hahahahahahaha anywho WONDERFULL!
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LisssssyyyJanuary 16th, 2009 at 06:21am -
chapter 14-Yeah, I figured youd get annoyed with my commnting EVERY chapter lolol But hahahahahahahhahah she slapped him! haha! thats funny...
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AliceJanuary 16th, 2009 at 03:38am -
chapter 12-Oops commented the last chapter twice...oh well...OMG that was funny, I didnt get it at first but after about 5 minutes i did...typical blondee XDD
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LissyJanuary 16th, 2009 at 03:28am -
Chapter 11-Awwwwwwww hes soo sweet I like how she said she isnt going to commit suicide again haha! Its like gossip girl but better!!!January 16th, 2009 at 03:23am
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Chapter 11-Awwwwwwww hes soo sweet I like how she said she isnt going to commit suicide again haha! Its like gossip girl but better!!!January 16th, 2009 at 03:23am
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Chapter 10-Nawww poor samm! Im glad she feels loved now! I love how she didnt think about what would happen if it didnt work, niice sarcasm! XD And yes, I do like to comment every chapter! XD
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LissyJanuary 16th, 2009 at 03:16am -
Chapter 9-Awwww sad :( Of course YOU know what is coming, well i mean, hopefully, altho I never do in my own stories, its allll improv XDJanuary 16th, 2009 at 03:11am
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Chapter 8-WOW that outburst sounds like the one I had with my mother when she made me move over LOLJanuary 16th, 2009 at 02:57am
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ROFL @ the comment above, alice, shh, u are beautiful lovee.
but only because u are my sister <3January 12th, 2009 at 07:25am -
I just HAVE to say! I LOVE this shelley character! She is me!!! besides the beautiful part...but other than that she is soo me!! LOLJanuary 12th, 2009 at 06:14am
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This is great Rose! I really like it, the chapters are nice and short and its an easy read...as Bella would say...a page turner but every book is a page turner...this one is more than a page turner tho! It is a fast page turner! Keep up the good work!
xoxo
Lissy!January 11th, 2009 at 07:25am
i loved it, we should sooo write a story together.