Two Kids, One Love, Who Cares If We Make It Up? - Comments

I read the whole story today and found it really good :)
Poor John!
:'(

This confused me for a bit. XD I'm only on chapter 3 though. Haha.

Fucking bloody hell, I need some alone time. Haha.

So my first reaction was to say fuck you! and then try to kill you. Well, technically that was at the end. All throughout the last chapter, I started crying. Like when I started reading like,"Oh fuck. noooo!!!!!" and then tears were pouring. I mean what the fuck? This story was sweet, and happy; I don't cry that much over stories; I don't cuss alot. WHAT THE FUCK. So you better write a terribly good sequel and stuff. If I can stomach even reading. I mean, for all I know, it'll have a sad ending. So basically I'm really pissed off.
I have to say, it was a wonderful story to read. And I love you bunches! You're very talented. x)

i honestly just balled my eyes out
i can't even believe that ending.
i'm completely and totally in shock right now.

shes dead?! she was having a girl?
poor johno
i feel so bad

WHAT THE FUCK!?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I thought this was going to be a happy story.
Me no likey! *huffs like a two year old*
Oh my god.
I'll comment again later when i'm out of shock :/
x

Wow, that was possibly the greatest story I've read so far. The ending made me cry, my eyes are still puffy. They say only greatly written stories will make you do that. A+ for you.

OMG!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED HER OFF!
But hey, it wasn't cliche or expected so props for that!

Can't wait for the sequel...seriously hoping it won't nearly make me cry like this one did! It was well written ((even though there are a few editing mistakes)) if you need someone to proof them for you I'm more than willing :D

omg! i cant believe she died
that's so sad

this story was so amazing
u wrote it really well

cant wait for the sequel

I've only read up to chapter 4, but I love it! You're a really good writer!

i constantly reread these stories; i love them! [:

yay! they're pregnant

wow

I love this so much :)

aww!
:D

aww they're gonna have a baby
thats cute!

cant wait for more!!

great update
please update soon!
i'd love to read more!!

definitely love this story. it makes me really happy.

aww, this was so cute :]
i love her mom's reaction though. haha

I cried just a little... It was great please update soon!

:] this is, by far, one of my favorite stories.
i love john and peyton together, so so so much!