The Healing Power of Alcohol Only Works on Scrapes and Knicks - Comments

This was a very descripitave story :) Complete and FABULOUS is correct, indeed :)

Wow, this was really beautiful.
You described the characters in a way that created a perfect image in my head, and it was really easy to picture it all.

Like Erin said, you write in a way that made me want to know more about everything. I sure wish I knew what happened after that night.

You're an excellent writer, and such a worthy winner of the contest.
Congratulations! :arms:

Okay, I was having some trouble before getting this comment to work, but now it is so here it goes.

From the first few paragraphs, I could easily picture what Keagan looked like.
This is wonderful because I get a sense of what the character will be like, just from the appearance.
People say never judge a book by it's cover, but in original stories that's exactly what you have to do.
Wonderful.

The way you describe things makes me want to know more about them.
Even the way you described the sign that Keagan sits under makes me want to know more about the way it glows.
It's an excellent description, but on some things you could give me more because now, I want to know about the patron that asked him why he look so dejected even though he's just a background character.

Andy didn’t understand, but nodded as Keagan gracefully changed the subject, leaving the unsaid unspoken though it ran through both their minds.

The healing power of alcohol only works on scrapes and knicks…

Ah, such a cute ending. I actually had to choke back an 'aw' because I 'awed' so much at this story, it was ridiculous.
You did a really nice job with this!

Have a good day and good luck!