Be the One I'm Looking For? - Comments

Hey! I love it!! I really love pairings like this but I can't find them normally. I know you haven't updated in forever but I really hope you'll start writing this story again.

I really love this. I've been looking for an Oli/ Hayley story, and today I finally found one. It'd be great if you updated! :D

This story is really good. It's actually the first Paramore fic that I've read that isn't absolute crap. I've never listened to BMTH, but I like Oli/Hayley is a very cute pairing. Very sweet.

But yeah, great story .

You should update very soon. :)

I really like it.
I like how you paired the two together.
Update soon.

Kimmy

Dude, this story is awesome. You HAVE to update, SOON!
I'm subscribing.

Ooh! Not one, but two updates just WAITING for me. Hahha =]

This comment is not gonna be long 'cause I was up early and my brain is going to disintegrate if I stay up any longer.

Well...as always, love the updates! I really liked Chapter 2. It was cute how Oli and Hayley thought they were making fools of themselves the whole time. I just love the story, with all the romance in the aiirr <3 lol.

Can't wait 'til Hayley n Oli hear each other when they perform. UPDATE AGAIN SOON!! Pretty pleasee. (:

Yes, like a breath of fresh air...

Idk what I'm supposed to say next, but it's quite obvious I ADORE it!

Up. Date. =P

I love this story!
Oli and Hayley...ugh just amazing! ^_^
Can't wait for te next update.

Hey, I just wanted to thank you again for choosing my banner. I noticed that a few others made one for you and it just means that much more to me that you chose mine.

Ahhhh, FINALLY! I read your update.

I can't really start off with a long comment since my brain is totally dead right now and I'm super-tired, but I just want to say that Oli was so cute in that chapter!

It's even more cute when you picture him with his awesome accent being all shy near Hayley. Again, I absolutely love it and can't wait for more!

i loved the update!
ipdate soon!

Yay! I love it when you start new stories =D

Oli Sykes and Hayley Williams...very interesting couple. Paramore meets Bring Me the Horizon~!!!

Yah, I agree with Kavleen. Oli must have been totally mesmerized when he saw Hayley's flaming, vibrant hair. How cute =]

Wow. So far the story is captivating...and romantic x3 Love it!

Oh, and I listened to Suicide Season. I loved it! The lyrics are soo sad and meaningful. Diamonds Aren't Forever is awesome too! I think that was the one you showed me...? Can't remember.

Hey Aliya!

Okeh, when I checked this one out, my eyes were attached to it like glue.

....you hypnotized me once more with your divine writing spells! Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter for various reasons. Obviously, it was very well-written, and I enjoy the enhancement you gave to Paramore and Bring Me The Horizon's personalities. It fits them perfectly!
I could feel that rush of excitement when I read the part where Hayley rushed to Oli to see if he was alright from when he tripped from stepping out of the bus. I could feel a little romance coming up...
I don't know why, but I felt sorta touched when Hayley noticed Bring Me The Horizon on her laptop (it was a laptop, right?). It's like, "WOOOHOOOO SHE FOUND 'EM!!!!"
Haha, I just remembered that bet that Oli had with Curtis. I felt a smile tugging up at the corner of my lips when I read that. You have excellent ways to add humor to your fanfics.
My favorite moment of all was when Oli noticed Hayley's dynamic hair. I'm thinking, "YEEEAAAAHHHHH, HE"S MESMERIZED!!!!"
Hayley's Hypnotic. Hypnotic Hayley. I like that. Hypnotic Hayley describes her so well becuase her appearance and her voice just gets you locked in a wonderful daze at what a beautiful legend she is, amirite?

To be honest, I laughed a bit when Oli was bleeding. Clumsy fool xD. But that's good, because you gave Oli a real, honest, and blazing personality. Even though their wasn't much in that chapter, from your writing, I know for sure you'll tribute him with more glory! =]
And Oli's thoughts make it seem like he's attracted to Hayley already. Love at first sight! <3 I know from your summary that they don't start off well, but I just love that feeling I get when you know that something's good might happen.

Well, I feel this is a good length for one chapter. I obeyed your wish for a long and precisely honest comment, dear friend. =)
The most focal part of the story is that picture of Hayley and Oli you created at the very top. I love the creativity in it and it enchants the mood of the tale, ya'know?

Love it!

I'ma clicky the subscribe button nao~

I like the pairing.
Its sort of unusual. :mrgreen:
Update Soon?!