The Murder and the Parliament - Comments

It's almost like it's a dungeon full of rape victims. I love the names you pick out though. ^^ Synchtos!

Excellent... Mwhahaha.
It took me a while to remember the last thing I read of this story. I'll have to reread it, since the only part I remember is the part where Elliot and Lauren take off their clothes to enter the demon realm. XD Oh, and Derrik who has Voldemort on the back of his head!
Just remember that short updates are better than no updates. (:

All the same, I appreciate that you're going further with this story, no matter how short it is.

All the same, I appreciate that you're going further with this story, no matter how short it is.

So I kiiinda really want to read more of this story. Update? =/

Bittersweet Kiss:

Hey, that actually makes sense. I see where you're coming from when you say the demons/imps come from our mind. Meaning, like, they're developed from our impure/dark thoughts? Whoa. That's kind of awesome.

Haha. That's MUCH deeper than I intended. XD

o! Lover.:

Haha. Well, what I meant was, the imp's voice is in the back of his mind. I'll have to read it again. I knew I wasn't being clear enough. But in an early part of the story, I describe Elliot talking to a demon in the same way. Demons (imps included, they're like lesser demons) come in the form of voices in your head. In our realm anyway. In their realm, they take on a human form! Haha.

Hey, that actually makes sense. I see where you're coming from when you say the demons/imps come from our mind. Meaning, like, they're developed from our impure/dark thoughts? Whoa. That's kind of awesome.

Haha. Well, what I meant was, the imp's voice is in the back of his mind. I'll have to read it again. I knew I wasn't being clear enough. But in an early part of the story, I describe Elliot talking to a demon in the same way. Demons (imps included, they're like lesser demons) come in the form of voices in your head. In our realm anyway. In their realm, they take on a human form! Haha.

Whoooaaa. Derrik has an imp growing on the back of his head! AWESOME. Reminds me of Voldemort growing on the back of Quirl's head in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. XD

I want one!

I'm finding myself liking this story more and more and more. ^^
And is it wrong that I liked chapter 23 more than I should have? XD Haha.

Okay, just read the first chapter and I'm sad to see that this awesome story doesn't have more comments.
I can't wait to see where this is going. :D

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
Please?

Mrs. Pleasant:

I still like this story!
And who drew the picture on the layout?
And what exactly is Lauren?

I found the picture with google. I may draw my own eventually.

And Lauren is... something else.
I'm not sure what you'd call her.
She's kind of like a vampire, but not. :\

I still like this story!
And who drew the picture on the layout?
And what exactly is Lauren?

I LOVE your layout!!!!

And I'm so glad you're posting this on mibba now. ^^

wow, really interesting! i like it so far :)

This is a good story so far! I like it!