I enjoyed your entry, because it was really intersting how the story was told from one setting. All the characters were all included without ever having to leave the bar. The characters were believeable and had depth. The plot of the short story was deep and was surprisinng.
The only thing I would have changed would have been to have some dialgoue. Character interaction would have been more believable.
I enjoyed your entry, because it was really intersting how the story was told from one setting. All the characters were all included without ever having to leave the bar. The characters were believeable and had depth. The plot of the short story was deep and was surprisinng.
The only thing I would have changed would have been to have some dialgoue. Character interaction would have been more believable.
Great Job, and thank you for entering.