:tehe: I'm so embarassed by my first two stories because of how different they are rather than my writing now. That's why they're not on my profile. x] But thank you mucho, it's so nice to hear how much I've improved =D
Gack, your guys comments absolutely killed me. <3 I absolutely love the feedback that I get, especially from the two of you. It all means so much to me, really. I can't really even try to begin how it makes me feel, all I can really say is thank you so so much. <333
Ahh! I feel soo bad I haven't commented sooner. I was caught up last night between watching the Super Bowl and trying to finish a history essay. Then I was going to read it but my mom was kinda lurking around, I think she was waiting for me to go to bed so I couldn't read it till I got home today. Then I was busy so I couldn't comment then so I'm commenting now.
Which brings me to say that this chapter was soo worth the wait. I loved it. I feel redundant saying I can't wait to see what happens next, but it's true.
Oh and I'm glad you're taking the story slowly it's good that way, it makes it more interesting and more realistic, instead of jumping right into it.
First, whenever I'm procrastinating from doing my assignments (which is a lot lol) I usually start reading your past stories. I read "It started off with a trip to Oakland" or close to that this week and my god, it's like it's a different author writing it now. I can't believe how much you've improved, with the dialogue, actions and writing style. It's quite amazing!
I love how you're taking this story slowly. It makes it so much more believable and enjoyable for me to read. I'd hate for it to have been them meet in one chapter and then get together pretty much the next, man, that would have sucked. Keep going at the pace and detail you're going :)
And finally....onto the chapter. Argh! Loved it. The amount of times I've met guys and they've said they'll call but haven't but omg...that butterfly feeling and excitement when they do. Ah, love it :)
Love this story. Can't wait for more....really really can't =D