Matters of the Heart - Comments

I know I'm not supposed to post, but is this story done?
Should I know not to expect more? :[

It was really amazing though.

So this is what I get for thinking the story was over a few chapters ago.

Shock. Complete shock.

Thanks a lot, you two. In the future, try to avoid giving me a heart attack if you can. Otherwise there will be no more oddMCRfic from me. 8P

O.O

WOW.

i.... wow...

wow...

i cant.... i dunno how to.... explain....
damn.

this is too real. im half believing it.

O_O
AHHHHH
that was unexpected.
*looks forward to much more*

HOLY FUCK!!!!
ALICIA'S PREGNANT!!!!!
wow....
That was not expected!!!!
but still....
I LOVE IT!!!
more please!!!

STROUP!:

O.o

Why do I have the feeling that their child will be some weird reincarnation of Gerard?

No that would be way to weird for me! :O

awesome update :)

O.o

Why do I have the feeling that their child will be some weird reincarnation of Gerard?

wow...
that was really.. hurtful.. of mikey to say that he wished Frank was dead...
but at the same time, i understand, and i bet frank did too..
poor guys. :'(

I didn't cry. Not that time, though there was that eye burning sensation that I felt on the dots of my lashes. I really need to stop talking about crying and such at this story. I know you've probably grasped the point. But man. Right on. I feel I need to keep telling you and letting you know how much emotion I feel, even when it's getting to that low, cliche' repeat of feeling. But if it flues you as writes -at all,- then I'm not going to stop telling you.

Again, the description was phenomenal work, and the dialog was beautifully exchanged, even though it was so orange and blue with burning compassion's. Man. I really need to get out of this habit where I just go on and on telling you all you're doing right. Maybe. You should do something wrong, you fucks. Of course, I'm only joking, but you're incredible in your wording. Both of you.

He killed the faith; he killed the hero.

I refuse to condone that. The faith. The hero. Neither of them will ever be dead. To the day after the band really is gone, to the millennium where My Chemical Romance have never even been heard of, there will never be a time when faith is non existent. Or so, I believe. The hero will always be the messenger and the message will always spread the faith. Again, or so I believe.

And... Frank. This is the touchy thing to get into; the touchy subject to comment on. Mikey is only going through a very hard time; it's not Frank's unfortunate fault. Frank didn't pray that Gerard would die. He never set up a plan to have a friend crash into Gerard or anything, (from what I know.) So what Mikey said to him was just mean. It was just cruel and unforgiving. And sick.

You guys made me cry...

You totally killed my life.
In both the good and bad sense of the phrase.

It's filled with so much emotion, you totally feel it.
Too real, guys, too real. :hand:

And I feel so bad that they really do feel like that.
I think I'd feel the same if I was Frank.

I don't know whether to be glad or saddened that Mikey finally came out and said what they'd both been thinking...

Kehli Vengeance:

This story has a way of bringing out my emotions, probably terrible.

Each chapter feels as if it's true, and for a second after I'm done reading, I do believe it's true. The two of you write with such emotion, such description, creative analouges and I hate you both. I hate you for making me cry and I envy you talents. You story has me whipped and I'm begging begging and pleading that the wait for the next chapter won't be as long?xoxo

Hopefully it won't...but I start school Monday, sooooo...

I just finished reading all of this, and words can't even BEGIN to descibe what I'm feeling right now.

I've cried reading fanfics before, but this story does so much more. It's so realistic. Both of you writers have absolutly amazing talent.

Every chapter is so detailed. Whatever Mikey and Frank are feeling, it's like I'm there with them sharing the pain.

Please update as soon as you can. I'm like addicted to it already. BRAVO!

xxx.,
Nicole.

This story has a way of bringing out my emotions, probably terrible.

Each chapter feels as if it's true, and for a second after I'm done reading, I do believe it's true. The two of you write with such emotion, such description, creative analouges and I hate you both. I hate you for making me cry and I envy you talents. You story has me whipped and I'm begging begging and pleading that the wait for the next chapter won't be as long?xoxo

Oh.
My.
God.

I'm speechless.

wow!

more?

omg. you have no idea how many times i have been in tears whilst reading this.
it is so sad.
and REALLY well written, i forgot for a moment that this isnt actually true ... well i sure as hell hope not.
its so realistic, and so sad.
god forbid anything like this ever happening!
yeh, so, awesome writing.
x

*new reader*
i have to say
this is one of the most depressing fanfics i have read
please update soon

This story is amazing!