I miss your writing.
May 24th, 2009 at 05:02am
Congrats! You have won First Place.
I really loved your story. The words flowed off the page. Your characters bounced to life, as if I knew them personally. I loved the descriptions, and that you included dialogue. It was very impressive.
My favorite lines:
Maggie Lewis was a backstabbing, vile, deceitful, boy-stealing, manipulative slut who wasn’t even that pretty. She was a poisonous, sly, little roach who hit the bottle and the bed sheets to resolve all of her make-believe issues.
I have no criticism.
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- - - Ash