It's in Our Blood - Comments

This is such a good story. You have some serious talent. You are really good. i am addicted to this story!! I really love it. Please update soon because its driving me crazy. I want to see what happens next

i love this story, how everything you hear about the "heroin" is giving from said "side-kicks" point of view. please update soon :)

I agree with Sam. The bitch should go down, but they could at least wait until the end of the huge war coming up to see if Bella's going to die anyways, which would mean that killing her is unnecessary. I'm for Nyx/Edward and Kari/Jacob, personally and Bella should find herself a human to do stuff with. And demand an abortion. I don't understand why she still wants the kid if she knows it'll kill her! Gosh. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Aieeee, this is really really good. :D Jacob is stupid for not realizing Kari is his imprint! And I dislike Bella. Always have, always will. Eww. Can't wait for an update... I'm psyched to see what happens! :D

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U did a WONDERFUL job on this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

update sooon

its amazing

I think that they should all kill Isabella.
Really, no one would miss her.
Apparently no one needs her there.
If she's dead, they don't have to worry about anything else.
Nyx and Edward can love each other and so can Jacob and what's her face.
No need to add on more drama bringing another half vampire child thing into the mix.
So I'm up for the 'Down With Swan' plan.
Anyone else joining the cult?

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I love your story even more than twilight! I love the way your characters seem so real, yet you know its fiction. I love your story so much that I didnt even finished my homework. Please keep writing ! You are a great writer and if this was in book stores, I would buy like 20 copies! Im done writing for now, but this is not the last of me.* evil laugh*

OMW, the "it's in our blood" story is awesome. When you wrote the last chapter about how Edward screwed up, fabulous indeed. I felt the anger in it all. PLEASE CONTINUE.

What the fuck Edward.
What the fuck was that?!
Gah, I wanted to stake him a couple of times through the heart.

OMWORD, please can you continue. The story is AWESOME. One of the best by fair.

this is amazing! i couldn't stop reading it all day. I swear this is better than the original twilight! yes i did just say that! you have to update soon, cuz i am hooked.

xD

OH SNAP! YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY!!!!

OH MY GOD! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! NOW!

I'm about to pull my hair out! UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY!

:D
you're an amazing writer, for sure!

xDDD

I love this story it's amazing, update soon??

Well, I have to say that you're very creative and you have some great ideas. There was really good character development, and It you depicted each character vividly. There's an interesting storyline with some good battlescenes. But I really do think the drama was taken a little too far. It's just to the point of ridiculousness, really. For a while, I expected Aaron to hook up with Kira. It would have been cute.

its amazing

i read this whole story in two days thats why u havnt seen me comment. i would love for esme to discover kari is her daughter. i would also like to see her reaction.

I loved the update :)

I love the story. What happened with Jake was odd. Maybe Kieran should be with Nyx instead.