Early Sunsets Over Newark - Comments

when can i start writing?

awesome update!!
I loved it.
: )

holy crap!!

This is an amazing story!
I love it so far, however I think that you should tell whcih POV it is inside the chapter itself so nobody gets confused (like I did).

lol
But other then that, PERFECT!
I really love it. You've earned yourself a new reader and subscriber!
: )

Wow! I just read the whole thing in one sitting!! Yep it was that good that I couldn't tear myself away from it! More updates soon please?

This is really good, one of the best stories I've read in awhile.

WHAT BAND IS IT!?!?!?!?!
xD

I wonder who's coming on tour with them. I hope you update soon, I really like this story.

Thanks for finally updating.

Hey! Nice MCR fanfic! I like it! Especially this chapter! Write more ASAP!!! I only have a little itty bitty tip of constructive criticism; try reading it through again out loud cuz there are a few parts that don't make sense. But otherwise it's REALLY good. Keep up the good work!

silver-rose-forever:

In my opinion I think you should put who's P.O.V it is at the top of each chapter.

WQe put whose POV the chapter is in at the description of each chapter. That way, it doesn't become apart of the story itself. Everything stays in an organized fashion. :] I'm glad you like the story, though, and please keep reading!

I am a bit confused about the story and gerard trying to bed samantha part of that and the run thing so please mail me on my mibba account and explain.

In my opinion I think you should put who's P.O.V it is at the top of each chapter.

Awesome
It's pretty good.
I'm not much of a fan of fanfics or MCR, although I do like their music...
But this is good.

congrats it'sgreat so far,keep writing.