Internally Bound - Comments

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What's going to happen with her sister now? >.>

Amazing, Kelly. Simply amazing. You make me want to write something myself.

Also, very cool layout. ^^

I really like how you intertwine lots of memories into the story so we getting a better feel for the character and their background.
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AH!

I just cannot get over how wonderfully written this story is. I loved the flashback of how Synn got her scars. And I reeeeaaally freaking love Allen to death.

D8

Will she go with him???

Aw, poor Synn! I wonder what'll happen next... loved it! :D

Whoa! At first it was kinda creepy, but now I'm actually very curious! You got a very good start! ^_^