Tracing Spaces Raindrops Make - Comments

Trying to figure out how to accurately express myself without fangirling too much.
This story... oh my God. Definitely one of the best fan fics I have ever read. I have read so many stories on here lately, and for the past few years... and this one definitely is ranked pretty high up in the just amazingly written factor. Wow.
I have stumbled across so many stories with such bad grammar and inaccuracies it's cringe-worthy, but this... none of that in the slightest. It is seriously awesomely written.
And then not only that, but it had such a sweet romance story and the plot played out well and I'm just... emotional with how good it was, OMG.
Like this seriously sounds like something publishable. I mean, minus the fact that it has famous band people in it, lol, but if you rewrote this with all original characters I could seriously picture it actually being published.
You definitely have the skill and I want to commend you for that. But also kind of rag on the fact that this is your only Alex story! Ugh, why? I really wish you wrote more stories with him because I would have totally checked them out.
If this comment inspires you to do so, which I kind of hope it does if you are still writing, I will definitely be one of the first to check out any other stories. Just hit me up. lol.
I also want to commend the fact that you stuck with one POV throughout this whole story. Amen to that, seriously. When people do first person, they often feel the need to switch to the love interest's POV and I'm just like, why? I guess to give more perspective but I honestly don't think that's the professional way to do it unless you do a switch like that, back and forth, from the very beginning. Otherwise, it just doesn't work too well, or make sense from a professional writing standpoint. I honestly don't know why people do that, but regardless, you didn't, and I commend you because you're definitely one of the first in a while that I've seen that hasn't done, if not the first entirely. I think maybe one or two other authors I've stumbled across have done the same. Definitely not many.
But yeah, so after this very long comment, I just... I really want to praise your writing on this. Seriously the best I've seen in a while. You had me reading and reading and I got this story done in just a few hours. Not even a day. That is how great your writing is, I just couldn't stop reading.
So great job on this. Even though it's been long since completed, I just had to leave a comment telling you how much this story amazed me. People like me are still stumbling across it and enjoying it. I'm surprised it didn't get many more comments, honestly. It deserves a couple hundred at least.
I really hope you're keeping up with the craft of writing. Hope to see your stuff on bookshelves one day. <3

I'm so super late in reading this, but I found this story to be very well written and enjoyable. Keep up your writing...it's good! :)

awe, I'm sad it's over :(
but this was a wonderful storyyyy! :)

Aw, it's over!
Okay, I was just thinking and this random thought popped into my head. How awkward would sex be in a hospital? I would imagine very much so.

Dude, that was amazing.
I'm sad and happy at the same time.
Get back to work with writing things soon missy!

Oh my gah! I cried and made several various "ah" sounds. But I loved it. And I'm sad it's ending. But excited for the next chapter. I'm flailing right now, and you've gotten me very anxious and worked up I hope you know!

No Alex! You're suppose to stick around. Not fly off like a chicken when you face a difficult situation.

omg I protest the ending of this story, please at least have a sequel!!
There are only a few amazing stories that I absolutely love on here and they are all ending very soon. it's tragic.

but I love your story no matter how and when it ends. amazing job you are a great writer

is he going to her house????
ughhhhhh
they need to meet up.
the guys + kara should intervene about now.

I can't believe Alex snuck out ;(!
I want them to be happy together, again.
...I really don't want this to come to an end, either, aha.

I love her dad. He has to be one of the most understanding fathers. And don't worry, it's not cliche at all. It's usually the "bad father" and either a passive mother or none at all.
I'm rooting for Olivia. I just hope Alex can take faith in her words.

Yay! This update was like, depressingly happy... I don't know, it made me happy, haha. I guess you can live ;)

ok so outta boredem i found your story and read every chapterrr... you should hurry and update!!!

i dont want alex to be mad at her anymore :[
but i really liked seeing olivia and her dad together :D

Love this.

ahah I would like to point out I live in new hampshire.
That little thing in chap six about the sign made me giggle.

Keep up the good work.

where is alex?
why wasn't he home?

This story is absolutely incredible.
Alex leaving her house like that made me sad. I hope he realises that it was not her doing.

just read this story. its amazing. i love how it seems alex is going to get heartbroken, and yeah, that sounded bitchy but let me explain: every other story has him not affected and the girl with the broken heart.

I love how since she cant sleep, he lays with her and wraps his arms around her, and thats the thing that can get her to sleep. i'm just like her when it comes to that though, even with the sleeping pills, i cant sleep unless someone is laying/cuddling with me.

please say thats the last wee see of her mom and caleb? i think she'd listen to her dad, what girl wouldnt want her fathers advice. That'd be nice, like, if they met up and he talked to and just said he supports her decision on moving and not being with caleb. ohhh, maybe alex goes with her, and then the dad meets him to and her dad likes alex, and see's he treats her right so its a closed deal.

sorry, had to predict something

"I think I'll go home now,"

I loved that line. as soon as I read it my brain started singing Remembering Sunday. aha wow random much but I do love this story. More drama + updates pleasee

Every romanctic partner believes that the main character always wanted to kiss or cheat on them. But you know, sometimes you have to listen and hear them out. Sometimes you just have to believe what they say. Though I know that is really hard.
Thank you!