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  • xiluvmusicx

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    I vote Sage (sorry Nick)... older, foreign, sexy, tall and built men are always winners lol.
    And Sage should teach her how to kiss like he was going to!
    Oh and by the way, this is a cute story... I'm interested.
    LOL, I would tottaly vote Nick though :P
    This is an awsome story, update soon :)
    March 21st, 2009 at 02:13pm
  • dreamer;;

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    omj omj omj...
    they kissed!!!!
    ahhh i love this :D
    March 21st, 2009 at 03:11am
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    four: Loved the description of her dress. Now you would think; hey, why didn't daddy tell him to get his arms off of her? But he didn't, he just said goodnight and protect my daughter Sage-y. So this is my guess for two things: 1) Sage is her bodyguard and 2) he is also the one that she is to have an arranged marriage with. Can't wait to read the next chapter...hopefully soon.
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    three: Loving this. I'll def. be subscribing later on. Wondering about his second job as well? When will she meet Nick again? Wondering what will her father do when he finds out? Can't wait to read and find out.
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:34pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Loving the descriptions and the 'Romeo and Juliet' feel to the story. Wondering about as to why she can't see any other children her age; is one of the reasons because of the arranged marriage? Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out.
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:26pm
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    one: Liking this story. Sounds interesting. Wondering what exactly are they going to do out in the garden? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    February 26th, 2009 at 07:17pm
  • Dream.Your.Reality

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    I vote Sage (sorry Nick)... older, foreign, sexy, tall and built men are always winners lol.
    And Sage should teach her how to kiss like he was going to!
    Oh and by the way, this is a cute story... I'm interested.
    January 24th, 2009 at 07:28pm
  • dreamer;;

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    Kristen Dear:P:
    wow sage is her fiance!! i know it and man I can't tell who is sweeter sage or nick! Which ever one she choses can i have the other :P
    lol i totally agree... Sage is her fiance :D
    wonderful chapter lol i finally finished reading!
    i cant wait for more :D
    <3
    January 24th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • Kristen Dear:P

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    wow sage is her fiance!! i know it and man I can't tell who is sweeter sage or nick! Which ever one she choses can i have the other :P
    January 16th, 2009 at 06:55pm
  • starid09

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    Your story is so cool I really love it. Please update soon.
    January 10th, 2009 at 06:56am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    that sage guy actually sounds kind of nice...but i like nicholas better...i hope they like run away together or something...great job...i almost exploded into glitter and stickers lol...and rainbows were so close to shooting out of my arse...haha that was quite entertaining...update soon!
    January 10th, 2009 at 04:59am
  • andloveisaword

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    Whoa, thats amazing! Please update... NOW?! Lol, I cant wait for more.
    January 9th, 2009 at 11:57pm
  • dreamer;;

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    im really into this story :D
    i cant wait for more
    January 6th, 2009 at 02:18pm
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    I don't understand why her dad is being so cruel. And trust me when I say I need to now. I don't have much patience. I really need to know. And who is her fiance. And Nick is risking a lot to spend time with her. I hope he is careful. Haha wow. I'm a dork. Anyway I love the story so far and can't wait for more.
    January 6th, 2009 at 05:09am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Tragic? Why must it be tragic? It sounds like a fairytale to me and fairytales always come fully loaded with happy endings...so I will be expecting one. LOL. I really like it so far though...update soon!
    January 3rd, 2009 at 05:52am
  • dreamer;;

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    Yay first to comment!!!!!!!!! :D
    Bailey that was so good... seriously i am looking forward to more of this story! :D
    January 3rd, 2009 at 05:44am