haha, ohbob yes, this was good - i had to stop the music playing in the background because this was just like a movie scene, everything's silent but the 'clink' all the time... and the way frank acted and looked up at gerard and everything... brrrr... good writing!! thanks for the alternative version =)
ha, oh no - the end is great - cause it's not corny or anything - and from gerard's pov instead of frank's. and him simply not stopping but keeping on kissing him. and again: not corny. great... i could already imagine gerard's shock ;-D nice story.
oh this is good - i was just stalking your story-list and found this... first chapter is great, gonna read the rest now. i really like your writing style, i know i've told you already before, but i really do. it's calming and comfortable to read. feels real.