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  • Mrs. Whirly

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    I loved the way you ended it, so happy and cute. great writer.
    April 17th, 2009 at 02:25am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    aww thats so cutee!
    April 16th, 2009 at 07:21pm
  • bethycool

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    this was such a beautiful story *wipes tear*

    awws i cant wait for Maybell's story :):)
    fantastic story :)
    April 16th, 2009 at 02:31pm
  • Jyrki69

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    Awww cuuute ending! *wipes aways tears*

    Oooh and Coming Clean sounds awesome! *subscibes* Dance
    April 16th, 2009 at 02:17pm
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    okay so my eyes hurt and i can't finish reading it tongiht but i got to chepter 2. its good so far. you gave me an idea for my story so i am going to wuickly jot that down. but yeah, you write good. your writing style is awesome. and okay, bye
    April 16th, 2009 at 09:43am
  • xfireworkzstarx

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    YES

    AND YES TO THE SEQUEL IN MAYBELLS P.O.V

    OR SHOULD I SAY ....TREQUEL?
    OR WHUTEVER IT BE CALLED!
    April 15th, 2009 at 06:08pm
  • VoicesInMyMind

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    Hey. I think a story from maybell's point of view would be a great idea. I got really happy when I found out marc was the father, even though I expected her dad to be the father. Update soon again
    April 15th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • Exodus

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    yay! -is really happy Marc was the daddy- I actually started dancing when I found out tit was him XD.

    And having one in Maybell's POV would be kinda cool. get to hear what it's like for her and all, sounds pretty good.

    And I am also really happy that it isn't the last chapter though I thought it would be a fitting end if it was but still really happy it isn't! Wow
    April 15th, 2009 at 05:08pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    yay! its marc's baby.
    and omggg you should so make a sequel in maybell's point of view.
    April 15th, 2009 at 03:53pm
  • Jyrki69

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    Yay, Marc is the dad!

    I like the idea of a Maybell story :D
    April 15th, 2009 at 03:17pm
  • bethycool

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWS YEY!!!!!
    i'm so glad that she found out!!!
    and when all the interruptions came, i was laughing hehe

    oooo Maybell's POV...ermm...i think that would be good :)
    April 15th, 2009 at 02:54pm
  • FallingForFree

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    If you made one in her point of view I would totally read it.
    April 15th, 2009 at 12:48pm
  • FernFamicide

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    Aww sad :( But marc being the father is great =D
    It would be totally awesome for a story in maybell's pov =D
    update please
    April 15th, 2009 at 09:33am
  • Smile;

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    Omg! I am so glad that Marc is the father!
    But sad in a way, because their only child together died :(
    But yay, Maybell's point of view sounds great!! I would totally read it :)
    Maybe you could read my stories, Letters To You, and Behind Closed Doors, too? I want to know if they're worth continuing, so your opinion is greatly appreciated :)
    April 15th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • JaedeVendetta

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    at least it was marcs baby!! its sad but good!! im so sad that is gonna end!!! i think a story from maybells pov would be awesome!!!
    April 15th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • gibberish2019

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    AHHHHH! Cliffhanger! I wanna know....

    Update update update! xoxox
    April 15th, 2009 at 05:59am
  • caroline!

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    YESSSSSSSSSSH
    April 15th, 2009 at 03:00am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    yay they are going to find out who the father is (:
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:36pm
  • JaedeVendetta

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    total cliff hanger!!
    cant wait for more!!!
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:36pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    funerals are sad.
    April 14th, 2009 at 04:56pm
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