Aww, I feel so sorry for Nick, with his Pappy an' all.. I bet it was hard for Julia to see him like that. :-( ALSO! before I forget; I think your story is AWESOMEEE! :-D xox
I love how Nick just showed up when she was with her horse. That was Adorable! Omg. Poor Nick. And i have too agree. Poor Julia is never catching a break. It's about time that something happened to Nick. But it is so cute he comes to her. Cannot wait for the next one.
yey! or not really, it's sad that his grandpa died, but maybe they can sort things out now.. or something. and the fart thing, that was SO funny, haha, i lol'ed!
Wow. You just went and killed their grandpa. Jk. I really think they need to get back together. I don't know about Nick, but Julia is not holding up well...especially with whatever he keeps doing. Like...what was with the arm around the waist? Is he trying to kill her????
Wow, total 180. First he's all over Julia and she's like... negative. Then his world shatters and it brings them back together. They should know by now that they should BE TOGETHER.
i loved how he came to visit her, that was so adorable. and the reason he gave for it was even more adorable. (; he needs to make up his mind though, and i think it was smart of her to push his hand away at the concert--even though that would be so hard to do, especially with how cute he was being.
the second part was really sad.. poor nick. i loved the random thing about her dad's fart though. haha. and in a way [although this sounds horrible] it's kind of a good thing his grandpa died, because i dont think she would have been so kind to him under any other circumstances. maybe this way they'll have a chance to talk out the things they didn't get a chance to before nick ended things.
That was super cute that he came to visit her but I was proud of her that she pushed his arm away at the concert! He needs to make up his mind before things can go back to normal. Super sad what happened to his grandpa. I love how he came to her and she comforted him! I really hope they talk things over about their relationship...they really need to be together!
Oh my gosh, that was so sad! I loved that he came to see her just to check up on her because he worries about her. And I was flipping when she told him 'no' when he was going to put his hand around her waist. That was such a sweet gesture. Though, I completely understand that she was trying to protect her heart.
I almost cried when Nicky came to her. :( I mean, that was just devastating!! I wanted to snuggle him. Julia was great for him...which just leads me to believe that they are perfect together and they just need to make up and talk everything out. They need each other!
Okay i have decided! (it;s been so long.. i know) my thoughts are staright.. and incredibly unorganized but I know what they are which has got to count for something. So here goes nothing:::
Nick needs to mourn some mroe but show Julia that he's still there, nothign too drastic of course. They need to discuss her drunken fiasco and his intentions. She needs to reject him and possibly run to England.. or at least tel him that she is going to go to England (threatt) so that he gets down on his hands and knees and kisses her feet for a chapter or two while she second guesses why he changed his maind again all of a sudden. THEN, That other chick needs to be brought up (possibly earlier along with the the drunkness?) But all of this needs to happen ASAP because I'm buggin' to find out all of this.
FYI - I pulled out some insane lingo in this comment.
I'm hoping you've already gotten ten comments and I am one of the many pluses. phenomenal chapter.. and I'm itching for more. I'll have to comment again when I process my own take on the current position of the story. <3mk.