November 14th, 2010 at 04:51am
Concrete Angel - Comments
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I always love each story that I've read by you. You are such a beautiful writer! I hope you keep writing because your stories, no matter how sad they are, put a smile on my face.June 7th, 2010 at 04:28am
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This was way better than the one I wrote about the song. Great job!! I loved it.May 8th, 2010 at 08:26pm
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OMG! You made me cry. This story is so moving, I had a lump in my throat from the very begining. Not many things can make me cry, but this certainly did.April 22nd, 2010 at 04:33pm
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Sad...yet tremendously brilliant. :P
One of the few i Think I'll be reading again and again =DDecember 11th, 2009 at 01:46pm -
This certainly was a most devastatingly tragic story. Very well written, though. You certainly captured the young voice of Chelsea and the cruelty of young kids who don't understand. Brian came as a shock to me. D: I kind of wanted him to be real, but this way worked out much better.
That poor teacher. :/ She must feel so terrible. >.< I can certainly understand. Unf. So much powerful emotion, so very raw.
Well done. :] I've never heard the song, but after reading this, I so don't want to. xDD Eeeep.September 6th, 2009 at 10:43pm -
wow dude that was so good
this is the only sad story that i have cried over
amazing !June 27th, 2009 at 10:51am -
-sobs-
Oh holy shit, that was even sadder the second time I read it!
I don't understand how you could do that to a little girl, or to any child at all. It's just so horrible to think that some people actually do that.
You seriously have no idea how much this made me cry. I guess I'm just an emotional person? But Brian being in here did make me smile. I smiled through my tears! I love how you described him; that's the same way I picture him as a youngin'.
Ah! I need to stop crying! My mom already came in and gave me a wtf look because I'm bawling seemingly randomly to her, but it's really because of your amazing story! So I printed it off and I gave it to my mommeh to read! And I'm betting that in a little while she'll be crying just like me. :tehe:
Even though it was heart-breakingly sad, I loved it with every piece of my heart!June 17th, 2009 at 02:30am -
holy shit.
That was so sad...so beautiful. I love that song, you portrayed it excellently.April 30th, 2009 at 10:52pm -
Beautiful and tragic!
I'm glad she's with Brian now though. *snuggles them both*April 8th, 2009 at 02:43am -
aww that was sooo sad.
im glad that shes in a better place though! :cute:March 26th, 2009 at 08:57am -
That was awesomely sad.
And yeah, I'm crying,
I still loved it though.February 13th, 2009 at 08:24pm -
You had me tears... but I loved it.January 21st, 2009 at 04:44am -
i love the story and the song. both make me cry though, and the video for the song, i watch it for like two seconds and i'm bawling my eyes out.January 12th, 2009 at 11:20pm
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OMG that was so sad! But a really good story!January 10th, 2009 at 12:06am
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wowww.
that was so, so sad.
but it was amazing.
i loved it(:January 6th, 2009 at 11:55pm -
how can somwthing be so sad yet so good ='[
still crying
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INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!January 5th, 2009 at 02:47am
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*wipes tears*
The song makes me cry anyway!
But the story just made me cry just as hard!!
LOVE IT!!January 5th, 2009 at 02:37am -
that was soo good! but so sad.
i even cried a little!
i loved it!January 5th, 2009 at 02:20am
its really sad.. just like this song. but i love it :)