To See if I Can Catch A Dream - Comments

  • WannaBeFree

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    Yeah, uhm hi. I stumbled upon this and I'd like to know if you were going to contine it. If you could tell me it'd be happy!
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:02am
  • Bri-asaur_rawr!!

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    I don't like the switching and explaining the same situations either....
    But that's what Tiff wanted to do. I'm more into "Spin Circles For Me" so that's the one I concentrate on more.
    January 9th, 2009 at 10:42pm
  • Destined_Disaster

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    Hmm, I'm not to into the whole switching back and forth and explaining the same situation thing but -shrugs-
    It's still pretty good.
    Just one little piece of advice for you, if you don't like a story of your's, maybe you should take a break. As much as it would disappoint us, your writing should be about what you want. Plus if you force yourself to write, you'll end up hating it because it's a responsibility instead of fun. Just something to consider. I'm sure we'd all understand. I've tried to keep writing a story I wasn't that into and it made me want to stop writing altogether. I don't want that to happen to anyone else.
    I still love this story though.
    January 9th, 2009 at 10:27pm
  • ribcagemaybes

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    this is so cute!
    more soon!
    January 9th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • The Bride

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    Well... Spencer and Jon seem to be close... and going everywhere together. ;;P
    Heeee! =D

    Also, why aren't you having fun with the story?
    Just curious. You don't even have to answer if you don't want to.
    January 9th, 2009 at 03:36am
  • annagoesRAWR

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    brendon ... is so stupid. he isn't ... seriously hurt though right?
    just .. being stupid.
    January 9th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • rockstarDIVA

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    i really do lov this.
    more please :)
    January 6th, 2009 at 05:02am
  • annagoesRAWR

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    I like this =] it's really cute and ... kinda rydon-esque.
    January 6th, 2009 at 02:20am
  • PanicRox101

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    OMG I loooovvvveee this story!!!!! You have to continue it I need to know what happens!!!!
    January 5th, 2009 at 08:15pm
  • Bri-asaur_rawr!!

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    Thanks!
    January 5th, 2009 at 07:40pm
  • The Bride

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    I like this. :cute:

    Although I feel like I should tell you guys that dialogue needs to be double-spaced. I'm not saying it to be a jerk, but it's actually the rules. I think if you don't follow them, your story stops appearing on the story page. Sad I wouldn't want that to happen, you know?

    But anyway, I can't wait for the next update. I'm definitely subscribing to this.
    January 5th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • Bri-asaur_rawr!!

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    Sorry guys... I'm ouy of chapters because Tiffany hasn't given me her's yet. -sigh- maybe an update on Tuesday?
    In the meantime I'm working on my own Rydon.
    January 5th, 2009 at 08:19am
  • abstraient

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    Awww why is Bren crying? Ha still can't sleep.
    January 5th, 2009 at 08:01am
  • abstraient

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    I can't sleep! Updates are giving me something to do. Wow this is a lousy comment. Yeah me wants to know what happens to Ry and Bren.
    January 5th, 2009 at 06:49am
  • Destined_Disaster

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    :D Amazing story.
    I liked the first chapter. It's enough to capture your attention without being overwhelming.
    I love Ryan's character. He's a bit quirky and random, but very loveable. Ha ha, serial killer? That part made me laugh.
    By the way, nice background xD. I didn't even know that picture existed. Ha ha, they finally admit it!
    I'll subscribe. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more.
    January 5th, 2009 at 02:06am