I don't like the switching and explaining the same situations either.... But that's what Tiff wanted to do. I'm more into "Spin Circles For Me" so that's the one I concentrate on more.
Hmm, I'm not to into the whole switching back and forth and explaining the same situation thing but -shrugs- It's still pretty good. Just one little piece of advice for you, if you don't like a story of your's, maybe you should take a break. As much as it would disappoint us, your writing should be about what you want. Plus if you force yourself to write, you'll end up hating it because it's a responsibility instead of fun. Just something to consider. I'm sure we'd all understand. I've tried to keep writing a story I wasn't that into and it made me want to stop writing altogether. I don't want that to happen to anyone else. I still love this story though.
Although I feel like I should tell you guys that dialogue needs to be double-spaced. I'm not saying it to be a jerk, but it's actually the rules. I think if you don't follow them, your story stops appearing on the story page. I wouldn't want that to happen, you know?
But anyway, I can't wait for the next update. I'm definitely subscribing to this.
Sorry guys... I'm ouy of chapters because Tiffany hasn't given me her's yet. -sigh- maybe an update on Tuesday? In the meantime I'm working on my own Rydon.
:D Amazing story. I liked the first chapter. It's enough to capture your attention without being overwhelming. I love Ryan's character. He's a bit quirky and random, but very loveable. Ha ha, serial killer? That part made me laugh. By the way, nice background xD. I didn't even know that picture existed. Ha ha, they finally admit it! I'll subscribe. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more.
January 5th, 2009 at 02:06am
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