Harlequin - Comments

There was so much sadness. The feelings and emotions were so pure.

I can relate, I think other people can too. That's one reason why it is such an amazing piece of art.

I absolutely love your writing. It is so incredible. Every line is like poetry.
There is no way I can write enough or even try to express how wonderful of a writer you are. Words just won't do justice.

My favorite line- "My heart beats so slowly as if it were about to stop and every breath hurts my lungs like millions of jackhammers pounding against my ribcage trying to smash it.

I absolutely love your description!

*sobs* Oh, honey. I'm so sorry.

This is exactly what I'm terrified of. That feeling, that ache, that want for it to stop-- and all the things you consider to make it do so.

The letter is so raw with jagged emotion and fear and utter sadness, but there's strength in it. You know why? Because you're expressing yourself and not giving the hurt complete power over you. I'm so, so sorry. I truly am. .__.

You always have a incredible talent with words. You make every emotion, everything anyone can comprehend, gorgeous. Even the things that don't feel beautiful, things that aren't beautiful are beautiful because of the way you convey your thoughts and emotions. Your mind and heart sculp true art and enhance this world just a little bit more than before.

*hugs* Sara, I'm always here for you. I've been thinking about you a lot lately, wondering how you were and hoping everything was okay. I wish I could make you feel better. .__. But I am glad to see you posting something, regardless if the content is devastating and heartbroken.

I love the bluntness; how you said exactly what was on your mind, even if it was said before. It's a loop in your mind, and it's amazing how you can express that as freely as possible. My heart aches for you. I hope the sun shines soon for you. *hugs*

The ending was brilliant-- the perfect execution to a piece about a heart's partial death. You're my favorite author on Mibba. And you prove why with every word that you use in your intoxicating chapters.

It's sometimes hard to show vulnerability, especially to a surplus of people. I know it's extremely challenging for me to admit that I've been hurt and that I feel hopeless, mostly to myself. But you're embracing your emotion and doing one of things you do best with it-- write. You're admitting how you feel, accepting it, and getting yourself through this. *hugs*

I was crying while reading this. It's stunning and overwhelming. Just as it should be.

Please never hesitate to let me know if there's anything I can do for you. I hope you're doing okay and taking care of yourself. I'm sorry. .__.

I don't really get what this is about, but it's still good. At first I thought the girl was hanging herself, but she becomes a puppet? I don't understand... It's very well written though, so I decided to subscribe and comment :D