The Gamer of a Love Story - Comments

Esoj Awel (100)

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I write in Word and copy paste it, but the format in here doesn't allow mhy indents, believe me, it stresses me to ¬¬
plus I write a lot better in spanish than in english

January 12th, 2009 at 08:13pm

Dr. Jekyll (100)

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This looks pretty good, but you need spaced paragraphs. It's harder for someone to read a block of words and it usually makes people turn away.

January 12th, 2009 at 07:49pm

Esoj Awel (100)

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I hope it doesn't break tha magic of the story, but I wrote what happened to me this morning x)

January 7th, 2009 at 01:53am

andshewillbelovedx3 (100)

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This is a really good storyy so far.
I am deffinently goin to subscribe.
It's so detailed and it isnt like alot of the rest of the stories i have read.
I love neww things<3333♥

January 7th, 2009 at 12:56am