Fear in the Shadows - Comments

  • Beri...

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    Thanks everyone!
    You make me feel like it's all worthwhile!
    Glad you all enjoy it!
    February 5th, 2009 at 06:00pm
  • DontFallDownStairs

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    Wow.

    You know that descriptive stuff that Miss is always yakking on about in English (generally just before the bit where I switch off)?
    Well you've got it down to a tee.

    Once again, awesome.
    February 5th, 2009 at 05:59pm
  • The_Shadowy_Darkness

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    I love how you started out with a basic idea then developed it into something way more meaningfull. Loving the stories Bekki! keep going and have faith in your abilities. You are a great writer. Ly XxX
    February 4th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • Little red rose

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    I like this alot... It's engaging, interesting but mysterious all in one. It's really well written as well.

    So far the title sounds fitting for the story because mysteries always have suspense in knowing.

    Damn it i've gone riddlesome on you... best be off.
    Great start...

    Libbyness x :D
    January 7th, 2009 at 10:05pm
  • Beri...

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    i thought about not revealing their names, but it got annoying calling them 'he' and 'she' (especially since there would be two 'she's!) teehee =]
    January 7th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • DontFallDownStairs

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    Ohhhhh...
    I like it. Mysterious. Very Mysterious.
    Anyway... more!
    January 7th, 2009 at 09:58pm