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  • bubsxgreen

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    You need to type more of this up. How many pages of it do you have written, &how many pages have you typed up? Exactly, that means you NEED to post more. =]
    January 27th, 2009 at 12:05am
  • finnick.

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    sounds very interesting can't wait for more...constructive criticism: it helps to seperate dialogue it keeps people reading, trust me, haha but love the storyline :)
    January 9th, 2009 at 02:55am
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