SHIT!! That chapter was so freakin awsome!!! I was literally exclaiming "YA" out loud and scaring my husband at certain points during this. Excelent idea on how to change Frank into one with making it a sacrifice of himself to try and save his friends. That was also a great way to get them to forgive him quickly as well. That chapter was GREAT!!
Oh my Bob! I just read this the whole way through 8D I loved all of it, a few spelling mistakes but that's fair enough. You're a fantastic writer and I can't wait for more <3 XOJacQui