I'm not going to lie, this took me a while to get into. My favorite chapter would have to be the third one when King and Trista first meet and have to adjust to living and working together. Like most others have commented, the form you chose to write in is very unique, but you executed it well. The characters have a personality that lures you in and makes you stand behind them, which is good. It's not a flat story. Excellent job. :)
June 19th, 2009 at 03:26am