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  • rivals are insane

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    New Reader.
    love this
    please please please update sooooooon
    August 16th, 2009 at 10:46pm
  • goodnight-socialite

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    MEGA FLAILS!

    Brendon was confuddled, damn him!!!
    Jon is AWESOME, yay him!!!
    Oli is so cuteeeeeeeeee, I want him!!!

    This story is seriously looking awesome, I can't wait to see what happens! I sense drama and complication on the horizon, but that's ok, because I love them both! XD
    July 28th, 2009 at 11:07am
  • talking-bird.

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    You are incredible;
    Brendon is incredible;
    this story is incredible.
    July 27th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • Rian Dawson

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    I hope the inclusion of Jon makes up for it?

    Psh, duh!
    July 24th, 2009 at 12:57am
  • See.

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    Arrrghhhmygosh.
    That was great. xD
    More soon?
    July 23rd, 2009 at 08:18pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    Jon being in the chapter sure makes up for the lack of Brendon in it :). I really do hope Jon'll not spill anything to Brendon, that would suck. But I'm sure he won't.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    xox
    July 23rd, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • account is inactive

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    Of course Jon makes up. You know how he's all like "amazondotjon"? He should be AmazingdotJon, because jon is, well amazing!
    July 22nd, 2009 at 07:41pm
  • Franceschi;

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    I love this : )
    July 22nd, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • talking-bird.

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    OMG . I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :DD
    July 21st, 2009 at 07:16am
  • See.

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    Oh, no. ):
    Can't wait for more!!
    July 20th, 2009 at 10:42pm
  • account is inactive

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    Oh geez. Now she can't tell him. Since he doesn't remember her, it'd be awkward for her to just walk up to him and say, "Hey! You're the father of my child!" But obviously she wouldn't say it like that. I probably sound like such a fool right now so I'm going to shut up.
    Anyways, Loved the update, and looking forward to more Brendon!
    July 20th, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    Why did she leave before she told Brendon? He has the right to know. But than again, the timing wasn't all that perfect and there were way too many other people around.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    xox
    July 20th, 2009 at 03:01pm
  • See.

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    I can't wait for his reaction. (:
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    we got on like a house on fire.

    Interesting comparison. o.O

    But I really liked the chapter. =)
    July 1st, 2009 at 04:29pm
  • talking-bird.

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    OMG. :yah
    i love you.
    and this story.
    and katy.
    and oliver.
    and brendon.
    June 29th, 2009 at 08:21pm
  • The Color Abi

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    She needs to tell him...
    She just has too...
    June 29th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • Mat Devine

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    Wow I like this so far it's a very interesting plot line and you write very well :) can't wait to see more!
    June 29th, 2009 at 05:12pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    I agree, she should tell Brendon. I don't know what else to say really.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    xox
    June 29th, 2009 at 04:40pm
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    Oh yay! I'm so glad you're updating this! I had an idea for a bilvy story like this... but i never followed through with it because I lost interest in the Idea.
    June 29th, 2009 at 04:32pm
  • brucepayne

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    Cute.
    Amazing.
    Epic.
    As usual ;)
    May 18th, 2009 at 10:12pm
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