Johnny and Rhea - Comments

Kirjain lempiä nyt kuluva juoni. Pyhä ulostaa. Kuinka harvinainen että on.

Dieses Geschichte ist hübsch Süßspeisen. Ichabod Kran. Huh , gibt man kopflos Reiterin kommend in zu , sobald?

Så nå de er gonna gå høre hjemme i liste tilholdsstedet plantasje eh? oooh. :D

If you could understand any of this, then you are my hero!

Update now.

i dont want to be nosy, but... who is my one subscriber?

thanks for the comments guys!
as for the spelling mistakes, it was really late at night and i was rushing so i could get to sleep

haha.
wow.
cooleo.
i like it

I like your idea for the story and so far it's a good read.
Aside from spelling mistakes and such, it's good writing.
You shouldnt use abbrevations for stuff like 'Social Studies'
And when you are writing your dialogue, you should separate them so it will be easier to know who is speaking.
If you want, I can edit it for you =D

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