Ah! This is an awesome one-shot.
July 11th, 2009 at 01:43am
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! -dances with Caleb-
May I just say that this was ahhhhhhmazing! Not that I expected anything less from you. Pete and Cassadee were so cute, chillin' round in the snow. Your imagery was pretty much fantastic. Everything from the snow, to their interactions... to Patrick interrupting Pete's very detailed fantasy that someone else wrote for him.
... What a lazy bastard, to be honest.
But I dunno... just everything about it. It's like you used the perfect words. :tehe:
“I am nothing but a mess of broken lyrics and bad hair products. You are full of life, fresh air and sunshine, plain beautiful, inside and out. Cass... I think, I might just... no, I know. I love you.” Time and dust froze, as her eyes widened and flickered, resembling that of a trapped animal.
THAT was just... :cheese: And I'm surprised Pete can sum himself up so well. It makes me almost... LIKE him. -blinks- Woah, weird. Anyway, that was my favourite bit. Perfect. And cute. And I really need a thesaurus because I can't think up any new adjectives today.
Brilliant! There's another one.
I'm going to spare your story from my lack of... word co-ordination. If that makes any sense. And just stop now. Ahem. Once again, it is awe-inspiringly fantastic, amazing, brilliant, awesome, magnificent, fabulous...
Not really saving myself here.
IT'S GREAT. >.<
