Girl at the Rock Show - Comments

Hahahhaha Cuppy Cake. I think Elwin has a challenge on his hands here. I hope you have post more soon. I'm diggin this. :)

I don't know how but I kinda lost my way with this story and have finally managed to catch up with it!
I love it and can't wait to see what you have planned for it.
I hope there's more soon :)

I loved it! MORE NOW PLEASE!!!!

LMAO! Cuppy cake haha xDD

dangg. Such womanizers they are lol.
But you can't help but love them hehe.

Man I am definitely into the story again, I just really hope you keep updating consistently

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He laughed, kissing the top of her head.

Becca and Jimmy?! Awe, that's cute, hahah!

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Of course he would have the comfiest pillows.

Oh man. I just pictured these big, fluffy, sexy pillows with Brian sleeping on them.
I want those pillows.

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"He offered. He slept out on the couch."

-pouts- AWE! He's so sweet. :)

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"I just slapped Johnny Christ."

Everyone's dream, hahahah!

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"She walks around decked out in our gear and finds fans for meets and greets. Only true, die-hard fans get to come."

Is that seriously a real thing? Because that would be like, the best job ever.

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"What the hell is a Cuppy Cake?"

Ditto.

But if it involves being held by them, where do I sign?

XD

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"They basically make you their slave until they accept you into the group."

My mind went to kinky things when I read slave.
Oh damn.

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I smirked and started downing the beer myself.

Sounds like something I would do, hahaha!

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He pulled me up into his arms and rested the side of his head against the side of my own.

OH BOY!

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"No. He said that he can't do that while he's with Leana."

I FORGOT ABOUT LEANA!
NO! I do not approve of this relationship because Jimmy and Becca. Not at all. I love Leana way too fucking much.

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I would have to pull out all the stops with him. Lord knows I didn't mind one bit. No, not at all.

I caught that little innuendo in there. :D

Loved it! Absolutely loved it! Update soon!
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Then there was Brian, Who was down right sex with legs. Everything I was craving from a guy.

Mmm, yes he is. :D

He's too ymmy for words.

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Not because of who it was, mainly wondering how the hell he got my number…

WHO CARES?!

If that man was texting me, I wouldn't give a shit how he got my number, I'd just care that he was texting me!

Geez, she's weird!

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Ali, It's Brian. I need to talk to you. Please call me back. I'm sorry about last night. I was drunk and stupid and shouldn't have done what I did. Forgive me.

-dreamy sigh-
ALL IS FORGIVEN!

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Mmm…Sex…I could go for some of that.

But only if it's with Brian.
I'm not too fond of that Ryan character...

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"What have I told you about ever mentioning that day?" She growled. I shrugged, continuing to eat my breakfast. "I told you not to! That's what! Especially when someone is in this room!" She yelled.

Oh?
This makes me think lots.

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"Her father was in jail for raping her and her mother. Why would she ever go back there?!"

:O

WHOOOOOAAAA!

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Oh if only I knew what was in those drinks…

GHB or Jack or Captain or something else. Just guessin'.

I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED! It made leaving school early because I was sick so worth it! :D

Update soon!

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Sweet another update :]
& it's going to be funny if they end up drunk xD haha

I love this story so much. Very entertaining. Which is what I need during school!
ha

i loved it!!! lol please start updating again!!! i would love u forever!!

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"Would you go away? It has nothing to do with you! He didn't do anything." Brian looked down to me, a fury in his eyes that both scared me and turned me on.

Would you quit pushing him away? Damn myself! I'm just being so stupid! If he looks that hot, why don't I just jump him, hmm?

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"Drum bitch." Brian muttered in return. I gasped and smacked him hard. "Oh come on!"

At first I thought he said 'Dumb bitch'. Hahah! Wow, I need better contacts.

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That's kinda trampish if you ask me.

:roll:
Mr. Gates, you do realize that you are with Michelle, right?

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Oh my god, His ass looked great in those pants. I wonder how good it would look without the pants…

:lmfao
Oh I am so perverted!

But I can't help but wonder..

...how good would it look?

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Fuck! Why did he have to be so hot?!

HE CAN'T HELP IT! He was just born sexy!

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"You called my Ali a Tramp?!"

:lmfao

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"Oh fuck no you did not just wave your hand at me!"

:lmfao :lmfao
Oh wow!

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"Oh my god! Tatyana is going with them!" Becca shouted, rolling down her window. "Go Tatyana!"

:grr:
Oh, so SHE gets to go with them but I'M just fucking stupid and turn down sexy Brian! FUCK MY LIFE! :crazy:

My house if very lit up. It's purty and I like it. :mrgreen:

WOO! I'm glad I finally got to reading this update! I lurved it! MOOOOOOOORE!

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loving this story!!! write more as soon as you can!

update please!!!!!

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"Ryan, I am so sorry about him-"

"Don't fucking ignore me when I'm right behind you!" Brian screamed. I turned, giving him a 'are you fucking kidding me' look. I then turned back to Ryan and smiled sadly.

-imitates Stephanie tanner- How Rude!

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While I was up there though, I couldn't help but look at his ass in the jeans he was wearing. Oh my god, His ass looked great in those pants. I wonder how good it would look without the pants

Phssst Brian’s ass always looks good in whatever he wears; and Ibet know his ass does look good without the pants

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Fuck! Why did he have to be so hot?!

Gosh Woman!! Don’t blame him he can’t help that’s he attractive

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"I would really not care to think about that night you and the devil created your little demon, Ok?" Alana scoffed, hitting me with her slipper.

I knew I should’ve got up because now I don’t remember what I was going to day but I know it was Supernatural related

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I drew horns on him, a devil tail and then wrote 'Man-Whore' right above his head.

-sarcastically- She’s bad to the bone! But anyways this makes me think of someone else

nothing more to say other than i love it XD

I WUV IT =DD

its funny :3
& i like funny lol xD

hahah

Yay! Update =D
HUZZZAH!!! lol :3

I wuv this story <333

wow, i totally have a crush on Ryan now.

<3 for Ryan

Oh, I love your story![:

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. "You just saved my life!" I gasped in realization. He lightly chuckled and shrugged his shoulders a bit. "You did! I was going to get hit by that bus and you saved me! You picked me up and saved me!" I ranted.

He’s her Superman :XD

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"Your waitress Kendra will be here shortly."

I don’t know why I thought of Kendra from Girls Next Door

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"Uh, I'll have a yuengling." Kendra smiled and nodded.

Ihave know clue what that is of means

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"Tatyana, Adrian, and the guys are playing poker. Brian is somewhere, No one has seen him for like half an hour." Becca replied.

Is it strip poker?!?