We All Want Something Beautiful - Comments

This was beautifully written. Keep writing.

This was lovely, so true and realistic.
Usually I do myself a little hard with reading school AU, but this was great, especially you did what I use to do: Focusing on the description and emotions, adding just a few lines of dialog.
If a story turns out awesome in this kind of writing style, than it's fucking worth being read, totally :)

You got a great style of writing, of using words in the right way and making them having an actual meaning.

Oh, and *thumbs up* for that little sexual hint, THIS was hot =)

Go on, you're totally talented

alright? it was more than alright. it was fantastic! i just adore Rydon, and this one was sooo cute.. You described Ryan so amazingly haha xD
Very nice. : )

that was soooo cute i loved it!! If this is a one shot you should totaly continue it's very good and well writin. If its not then i cant wait for the next part! :D

This is more than alright - it's amazing :]

I love Rydon stories. :tehe:Call me weird, but I do. This is one of the best and I have every right to say that because I have read sooo many.

Awesome honey!