Leave Me Empty and Left to Wonder - Comments

  • honesty.lies

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    Yay! You already know I love this story, maybe it's the fact that in the same day I read it we met Chiz...
    Nope! That's not it, coz I love how it's written and the storyline and the sex haha (jokes)
    Man imagine what we would have thought if you wrote a Carden story like a year ago... Actually, Alex was going to write me one as a joke to annoy me remember? Haha.

    Anyway, this is amazing, I love it, thank you.

    xx
    January 13th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • Lonewolf

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    i love this muffin :]
    it was reallly good
    i love your writing!
    xo
    January 13th, 2009 at 12:44am
  • desertplaces16

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    I think that she does have depth.
    And the story is so relatable.
    I love it, you're a great writer. ( :
    January 12th, 2009 at 07:40pm
  • piecesofmydreams

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    “I asked you if you wanted to, not if you needed to.”
    ^ I loved that. It was really sweet.

    Anyway, this is going to sound weird but, I can relate to the girl in the story-the whole Hot n Cold affect from someone she loved(excuse the Katy Perry lyric/pun). Which means you wrote it extremely well. The way how you showed her love for Carden and then the hurt when she was left really struck me. It was amazing.
    January 12th, 2009 at 11:37am