Discovering the Past - Comments

Welcome back...i sincerely hope there is a follow up chapter to this chapter cuz it would be really wrong to leave it at that for another long time...
I love reading this and in the time you've been away in between the chapters ive read this story from beginning a couple of times.

As always good writing and i cant wait for what is going to happen next

Love Jess

That last part killed me, Frank sayign "sorry", I mean COME ON FRANK! YOU KNOW YOU LOVE HIM! FUCKING MARRY HIM ALREADY![I/]

Hahahahahaha, I kind of think that too but if they hook up, the story is over...U_U and there a lot more to come, the update will be up before the weekend!

Thank you Teletalk and Jocelia :)

Holy fuck, talk about the drama, that was INTENSE.
I mean, hell, Rose is lucky she has Frank as a dad, cause if I was her dad, I would of kicked her ass. She needs to calm the fuck down. Hope she apologizes to her father.

As for the frerard, oh my goth, SO FUCKING CLOSE!

That last part killed me, Frank sayign "sorry", I mean COME ON FRANK! YOU KNOW YOU LOVE HIM! FUCKING MARRY HIM ALREADY!

Thank you so much for the mention, and I hope you update much sooner, cause this, is, BRILLIANT.

I got so excited when I saw this had been updated =D

you should update maybe yeah? kthnxbii

Oh geez, fuck.

First of all, Hi- new reader!

I can't believe I found this, fucking story randomly. It is probably now THE BEST FUCKING FRERARD I have ever read. Everything is so perfect. All the drama, the characters, using real facts and shit from MCR vids. I cried during some chapters. I just... fuck I'm in love.

And this cliffhanger is killing me, so please update. Fucking please.

I'll probably die if you don't. This is incredible.

I´m finishing throught the review....there were some inconsistences...the problem qith the story was that I have written it in a very long time, with very long gaps......and the grammar...well I´m trying my best.....
thanks for the critisim is good for me...
and thanks for loving the story so much!!! really guys!
xoxoxoxx
I´ll be back very soon muajaajaja

don't worry about it or anything, i just felt the need to point it out and let you know. i still love the story and everything about this. it's amazing :)

wow just wow
i just finished reading this and it is probably the best story i have ever read you made me cry for like 30 chapters straight really great story
there are some inconsistencies with the ages and years but really well written
big fan cant wait to read more <3

I´m so sorr for the grammar, i´m not a native english speaker, and even though before I upload every chapter I cheked and cheked, I still got mistakes.
I won´t update until I correct the whole thing, I´ll do my best.
I´m so sorry guys, i didn´t know it was a big thing, sorry again.

okay, i feel the need to say this right now.
first of all, i love this story and the plot line and everything about it. it's a good idea and very interesting.
secondly, i think that the grammar in this is horrific. maybe it's just me bitching and people won't agree with me, but i just can't stand bad grammar, especially if you're writing a story. and it's confusing when you do flashbacks. so i guess what i'm saying is that you have to fix that because it's just weird mistakes. you change from past to present in the middle of the sentence, say something like" he looked away and bit my lip"... he bit your lip instead of his own? it just doesn't make sense.
alright sorry the rant is over. but i still really like this story, i just felt the need to say this. :)

Holy fuuuuuuck, dont tell me that Rose is pregnant! Frank's gonna kill Michael!
I actually feel really sorry for Michael, he seems genuinely love Rose
Cant wait to read some more!!!!

I wonder if she's actually pregnant. I hope not. Update wicked soon!

I've missed this story! :')
The dynamic of their relationship is really interesting.
You can tell Jr cares so much more than he is willing to show, and I think this is all hurting him so much.
I wonder if Rose is actually pregnant! :S Looks like there's gonna be some drama heading her way even if she isn't. Either way, I hope she opens up to Jr about it all instead of shutting him out.
Love this story - Can't wait for more :D

thanks guys, the update it´s just around the corner :) I´m waiting for more commnets :)
hohoo

omg ajklhsaklhj
She needs to tell jr.

Gah! She's in trouble...and poor Jr. He doesn't know a thing. More soon please

LoveTCS

I loved the ending! I wonder what's going to happen to Jr. and Rose. Update wicked soon!

The Bulletproof Heart reference at the end was perfect!
I hope Gerard plucks up the courage to tell Frank soon! And I hope Frank feels the same :)
I wonder what's gonna happen with Rose and Jr...
Great update! Can't wait for more :D

thanks guys, new update tomorrow or the next day...!
I promise!