Unpretty - Comments

I actually like this story... It's good and oh so very nearly as sexxy as your profile.

didnt this used to have a different ending? where frank dies? or am i making that up? cuz i thought i remembered her visiting franks grave. but i havent read this in ages so maybe im getting confused.

oh my gosh!!! i just finished reading this, and it has such an amazing ending!! love it so much, its perfect. i honestly think that, with a few spelling corrections, you could get this published.

*sighs* still havent finished reading yet, but i thought i would comment anyone, just to tell you that this really is incredible, and that i just recommended this to a friend; which i only do for the very best stories!! small point: near the end of chapter 4, dont you mean a 'pang' of guilt rather than a 'bang' of guilt?

This is such an awesome story!!!!! why am i the first one to comment?? do people here have no taste? or have they just not discovered this yet?? *SUBSCRIBES* update!!