March 3rd, 2010 at 03:28pm
I totally thought it would end differently that jimmy and anna are together but it's really amazing anna finally found happiness with a man she loves and jimmy has leana
they speak so highly of each other and they are not mad that they didn't stay in contact that's really awsome
really that story was really nice and it wa totally fun to read it
hopefully i will read more soon of your work :)
I liked the ideas you had, like the acting part or the bracelet and loved some of the phrases, like the last of the marriage chapter.
A big thank-you for the ending! I don't think I coul've beared another cliché ending like "I see you again after 10 years and we both fall in love again instantly and leave everyting / everyone behind to get married and have a thousend kids". A bit bittersweet, but it fitted!!
:)