I Got Wiring Loose Inside My Head - Comments

I'm going to be honest and say I don't usually like second person... but this was different. It was really good. Flowed nicely. I liked it :D

I liked it, it felt like it was missing something.
Whether it was just that little bit of detail or just the fact it was in second person, which generally is harder to write in. All the same, I loved it and as the others have said, it had a brilliant flow.

It was lovely to read, :)

This was amazing.
I loved the flow of it, it had a really nice ring to it so to speak.

That was great. There was something really natural about the style. It flowed really easily and didn't feel forced.

I want to say that it was lovely to read, but lovely just doesn't feel like the right word XD
But it was brilliant. Really. :]

I really enjoyed this one-shot! Amazing.

Mabsoot Maggie:

I think this is an amazing story! I want to know more! You're an amazing writer!

Thank you, but that was it. It's just a one-shot.

I think this is an amazing story! I want to know more! You're an amazing writer!