i like it, im not really sure what is wrong with the font either, but it may be someones computer, making it hard to read. also its really good, what language do you speak if this is your first english story?
great concept... i <3 it... it's really good considering you said it's ure first in english... although one suggestion... make it a diff. font.... i could barely read it!! :mrgreen: :P :lol: :shock: :D