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  • dancing alone.

    dancing alone. (100)

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    I don't quite understand...

    It was very beautifully written, not as many metaphors..

    But it started talking about time, but it just seemed like it sorta..floated off topic?

    And what happened at the end...I don't know

    And why he made a sword..I don't know either lol

    But regardless, I realllly enjoyed reading it, ou are VERY talented (:
    March 22nd, 2009 at 01:38pm
  • BlueQueen535

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    Ah! Such a short ending, but good nonetheless.
    January 17th, 2009 at 02:19pm
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