We're Crazy, They're Gorgeous, This Might Just Work. - Comments

So, not gonna lie
dotdotdot...
I absolutely hate it...jk (that was my attempt at humor before telling you the actual truth)
I lOVE IT!! I agree with ^Kimmie110394 though. When the story was about the action and not the romance it was better, but they're going on missions again, so yay. The relationships are good though, I wish I had one like that...jealous. But update soon. :)

Yay!
You took my advice!
: D
Awesome chapter!

damn man its about time Raven got that stick out of her ass lol
Sara Amour
i cant wait to read more
hehe i rhymed
im such a nerd
but of course as always i love it
and i cant wait to read what happens

First, I want to say that I like your story.
But I liked it more in the beginning.
Because it was more kick butt.
Now it's all about their relationships.
Don't get me wrong, I love a good love story, but I wouldn't make that the main focus.
I still like it though.
Message me if you need some more feedback..
:D

omg poor Raven
I understand where shes coming from on the commitment issues
god i feel so down now
i hope shes okay
u better finish writing the new chapter or i shall..... kick ur booty
i mean it
i hope josh can talk her down

<3 Jace's imprint :cry:

omg awwww
i love it
it was perfect
god i wish he was real
hes just too sweet
im still in awe
amazing update as always
and btw id drool if he was standing there all wet

<3 Jaces imprint

OMG OMG OMG
THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR
BETTER THAN SEAN DANCING IN THE RAIN!!!!

AWWWWWWW JACE IS SOOOOOOOOOO PERFECT
AND TOTALLY BEATS JAYDON NO DOUBT!!!
CAN I HAVE HIM PURDY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP!!!1
ILL BE HAPPY FOR THE REST OF ETERNITY
AND NO DRAMA
GOD HES AMAZINGLY.... JUST PERFECT
ONCE AGAIN FAVORITE CHAPTER TIGER

I CANT STOP SMILING
ok im done talking super fast and yelling lol
*sighs*

god ur amazing tiger

<3 Jace's imprint <3

thanks kit kat
it made me smile lol
jaces sexy ass man yummy lol
i wouldnt mind.... oops tmi lol
um great chapter tho
far away fit the girls so perfectly if u think about it
the first verse raven
the second destine
and the third scarlet

cant wait for ur update as always kid good job

omg u said that same line to me earlier
god jace is so so so awesome
i loved it despite it being short
update soon kit kat

awww!!!!
but omg poor Jace
hes damaged bad
makes u want to cry
now im going to cry omg
i wonder how the meeting her 'dad' will go
im scared for him
so sad my poor fiction wolfy man

HOW CAN YOU DO THIS? YOU CANT LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFF HANGER LIKE THAT!!!
NO THREATING ME WITH JACE EITHER MAN!!!!
UGH IM GOING TO START WRITING AGAIN
SO THAT WAY U WILL KNOW IM WRITING AND U WILL HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW !!!
IM SENDING SEAN YOUR WAY RIGHT NOW TO STRIP DANCE IN FRONT OF YOU AS PUNISHMENT!!!!

But on a happy note
JACE WON!!!!!!

Wow.
I love the updates.
I can't wait to see how the fight turns out!
Ahh!
It's killing me.

omg my eyes glassed over
he loves her
and she didnt get to tell him she forgives him *tear*
poor Jace
only a real man can take all of that yet still love her
u have to update now
if not i shall cry

i still want to be mad at him but i cant
he was going to give up alpha 4 her
hes a keeper
n sexy lol

wow amazing update as always kit kat
i lovers it lol
and jace got his brownie points back always

you almost ruined my Jace loveness
but he got it back again
he loves her thats so sweet
and hey man I resent the short jokes dude not all of us can be 6 foot something man haha
and u better get ur booty writing on the new chappie now missy

much love
skizzels

hahaha im doing what u do to me all the time
comments now u have to update tomorrow hahaha
god could u have made Jace any more drool worthy?

.... wow that was waaaaaaaaaaaaaay worth the wait man
im all speechless by ur awesomeness
im surprised Jace didnt try to stay with her though
it was perfecto
now im all happish lol
cant wait for the update young lady because that chapter was just toooooo awesome for words

Ok let me get this out of the way first
if you stop writing i will stop writing!!!

now on with the rest
SHES MEETING HIS PACK?!?!?!
How is Damian dealing with that? we all know that he is worried about his litttle sis
What did Raven do to him muwahaha
btw I havent seen Mr. and Mrs Smith either man lol

wow this chapter was fuckingawesome update soon u or im coming to stalk u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seriously who dates humans any more? lmao

i loved how Raven told Damian about what she was. It was such a sweet and sappy chapter I loved it
plus Jace looking pissed sounds hott yummy lol
up-to-date dawg

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooooooooo sweet
so what did Jace think of their date
i loved the chapter and hahahah to Josh and Damian they deserved it for being so mean to poor and innocent and deadly sexy Jace lol

up to the date soon