Claud Faust - Comments

The first chapter is a hit, the fight and the angel crying alone with her broken wing...Like x1000
The second chapter is like its a different story and it keeps you more interested, that was a good idea you used. Third chapter: Just who is she? Who is Anna??? And she cried??? Why??? So many questions that will find answers to the next chapters i hope. :-) Chapter for another diferent part with a new character Cassey. Who is the guy that can't see her with that man? Who is he??? At chapter five we finally know that at least Chaud, Anna & Cassey are classmates, that's a good start to solve the mystery. But Chaud is burning??? Lol. Chapter seven: What the hell happened before they woke up at Chaud's house??? And at chapter nine Chaud felt love but what about the angel??? Where is the angel with the broken wing?? So many questions...Your story keeps me interested in it, in every chapter. Keep going Iso! :-) And i know, big comment :-) Sorry for that :-)
You should also choose mystery for the genre of this story.

hey , liked your description :) and i am very eager to read the chapters :) more power .

WOW. Loved it from the moment I read the summary. =D There were a few grammar errors but other than that it's AWESOME!! xD Keep writing!

Iso! its annie. my gosh, you're a really good writer. i'd love to read more, keep posting =]

I love how all the characters are rushed into each other...randomly...but not randomly. Its an amazing story. = ]

i love it!!!
You muuussstt write moree!!!
:D its amazing, ohhh and your an amazng writer!!!
SUBSCRIBING.

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YAY! i finally read the updated!!! DO UPDATE SOON onii-san! :)

hey! I'm glad you updated.
poor Claud, but it makes his character have depth, so his past is important =)
keep it up. ^_^

This is really good

yay! cool story onii-san! i really liked it. :D hope you'll update sooooon. i'm wondering what's the connection of Helen's story with Mr. Faust. :D

Hey! I like the new updates, and I love this line from chapter seven: "...Secrets are secrets no matter what they might be”

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koL. . .UPDATE!!!!!!

:D. . . . .uuuhhmmmm. . .when will be my appearance??!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA JOKE!!

toinks!!! can I be the doggy!!!!!! please put a doggy there!!! :D

I'm_not_crazy:

i'm quite enjoying this so far. update soon!

oooh. . . .

I love it L. . .

write more, coz I really subscribed it. . .

hahaha

i'm quite enjoying this so far. update soon!

I'm glad you like my story. .^__^

hey L i love the story ^_^ update soon
♥autumn♥

Wow!!
This is ammazing =D
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I am LOVIN' story
Its good

may I ask people on how to add more description on the characters?