I Can Feel Your Love - Comments

  • beebosbooty

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    The milk fic reference gave me life girl xD i love how you made your stories connect so effortessly you have a true talent for writing ~ good job :)
    October 30th, 2015 at 03:43am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Unf! I love this story! <3
    May 9th, 2013 at 10:55am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    This is the second time I've read this and I love it so much <3
    March 15th, 2013 at 06:33am
  • DragonxFox

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    I love your writing but it scares me horribly.
    [in the way where i wanna stop but it's just not gonna happen].
    the words flow so well and the imagery is great, too, lol.
    great job writing this!
    August 11th, 2011 at 10:28am
  • dr. faustus

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    I told you I was going to read this <3 Everything we talked about makes sense now. My view of Ryan is different now as well as my view of Brendon. This was hardcore indeed and I thought you described their sexual escapade graphically, but not too graphically and I liked that. I haven't read many stories like these before and if I ever was to, I think I would only read them from you. What I read in 'Milk' and this everything came in full circle for me now :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • Mikey James Way

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    I absolutely loved this. ^___^
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:37pm
  • madison is cool

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    Loved it <3
    this is the second time I've read it, no joke :]
    I love your stories, write more like thissss !
    December 22nd, 2009 at 10:31am
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    Great job!!!
    I loved it!!
    -gives u a cookie-
    Gunna write anything more?
    December 19th, 2009 at 12:52am
  • ReinventLove22

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    Dark, torturessly rough, and sexy. Just what I was looking for. *Applause*
    December 6th, 2009 at 10:43am
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    I really liked this. It was very well written.:)
    May 19th, 2009 at 04:30pm
  • neonbluepunk

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    Wow. I've read a lot of BDSM stories, and I had to google Ball Gag. Don't I feel smart?

    Anyways, this is incredible. I love how Brendon's so laid back in the beginning... *evil smirk* Naughty
    *Giggles all over the place* This is incredibly awesome. I loved every minute of it. Ryan was so needy, so ready and willing, begging every moment for more. *Squeals* Muahaha! And Brendon just stretched his orgasm out longer and longer, and it was practically killing poor Ryan... =D It was a very, very good story. =3 Thankies!
    March 19th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • Brenny Bear

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    Awesomeness! This could probably be the first BDSM I read but it was good for the first one :D You're an amazing writer and I think a lot of people would agree. The ciggarette burn was the best part ;]

    Just magnificent.
    February 21st, 2009 at 07:31am
  • Sean Smith

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    That was very, very good.
    I love how detailed it was, and just your style of writing is simply amazing.
    I don't read Ryan/Brendon stuff a lot, but this was damn hot.
    The thought of Ryan and his little slut is brilliant.

    The little addition that Ryan had trained Brendon in the art of being a sadist, and now he is indeed very very good at it, was a nice little touch. It'd be rare for a natural sadist and masochist to just meet like that, it shows that there was a period of leanency behind it all.

    Just awesome :D
    February 8th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    that was amazing!!!!!!!

    I think you are my favorite author now!!!

    On to read your other stories!!!
    January 28th, 2009 at 04:46am
  • t'lema

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    Wow I loved this. Extremely detailed, but still classy. I especially loved the part about the 'milk enema' not something I've heard of before, but it made it so much more real, fleshed out.

    I loved the ending as well, the last line was just beautiful. Almost haunting, it gave me shivers.

    Honestly brilliant.
    January 23rd, 2009 at 11:35pm
  • soft rains.

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    I actually quite enjoyed this (which is saying something because I usually don't like smut).
    You were able to capture the desperation quite well and I loved the way that Brendon's and Ryan's personalities really fit together. I thought it was very well written for something that doesn't really have a plot. In general, it really captured the essence of sex quite well. It's a hard challenge when a writer has to write a sex scene and I thought you did it very well. It was smut, but it was tasteful, in a way. I loved how dark and sadistic it was.

    The only thing I noticed wrong with it was:
    “Are you read to choke, slut?”
    I don't know if it's supposed to be like that or say ready, I thought I'd point it out just in case.
    January 22nd, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • Romance.

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    Oh wow :D
    That was pretty awesome, and strangely exactly what I needed to read today.
    January 22nd, 2009 at 12:44pm
  • folie a dru.

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    New story.
    Ryden BDSM smut.
    Lots of hardcore stuff.
    Happy reading!

    xoxox
    -Dru
    January 22nd, 2009 at 02:05am