I love your writing but it scares me horribly. [in the way where i wanna stop but it's just not gonna happen]. the words flow so well and the imagery is great, too, lol. great job writing this!
I told you I was going to read this <3 Everything we talked about makes sense now. My view of Ryan is different now as well as my view of Brendon. This was hardcore indeed and I thought you described their sexual escapade graphically, but not too graphically and I liked that. I haven't read many stories like these before and if I ever was to, I think I would only read them from you. What I read in 'Milk' and this everything came in full circle for me now :)
Wow. I've read a lot of BDSM stories, and I had to google Ball Gag. Don't I feel smart?
Anyways, this is incredible. I love how Brendon's so laid back in the beginning... *evil smirk* *Giggles all over the place* This is incredibly awesome. I loved every minute of it. Ryan was so needy, so ready and willing, begging every moment for more. *Squeals* Muahaha! And Brendon just stretched his orgasm out longer and longer, and it was practically killing poor Ryan... =D It was a very, very good story. =3 Thankies!
Awesomeness! This could probably be the first BDSM I read but it was good for the first one :D You're an amazing writer and I think a lot of people would agree. The ciggarette burn was the best part ;]
That was very, very good. I love how detailed it was, and just your style of writing is simply amazing. I don't read Ryan/Brendon stuff a lot, but this was damn hot. The thought of Ryan and his little slut is brilliant.
The little addition that Ryan had trained Brendon in the art of being a sadist, and now he is indeed very very good at it, was a nice little touch. It'd be rare for a natural sadist and masochist to just meet like that, it shows that there was a period of leanency behind it all.
Wow I loved this. Extremely detailed, but still classy. I especially loved the part about the 'milk enema' not something I've heard of before, but it made it so much more real, fleshed out.
I loved the ending as well, the last line was just beautiful. Almost haunting, it gave me shivers.
I actually quite enjoyed this (which is saying something because I usually don't like smut). You were able to capture the desperation quite well and I loved the way that Brendon's and Ryan's personalities really fit together. I thought it was very well written for something that doesn't really have a plot. In general, it really captured the essence of sex quite well. It's a hard challenge when a writer has to write a sex scene and I thought you did it very well. It was smut, but it was tasteful, in a way. I loved how dark and sadistic it was.
The only thing I noticed wrong with it was: “Are you read to choke, slut?” I don't know if it's supposed to be like that or say ready, I thought I'd point it out just in case.