Silence Screams the Truth - Comments

  • BetrayedInBatCountry

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    this is actually a great story. yes, the chapters are fairly short, but the plot sounds sick so far. i love how you used arie's dialogue. that's exactly how my nephew talks. and that name is really pretty, but yes. this story is really good and those readers weren't sugar coating anything cause i really like it so far. and btw, you have some badass taste in outfits, darling.
    June 21st, 2009 at 06:18am
  • A_Dirty_Syn

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    Okay. I decided. I think you should continue your story. Along with my fantastic idea.
    I have some ideas you could you use since our dad wants to be retarded and sell our laptop for what ever nonsence.

    So update!!
    February 6th, 2009 at 01:05am
  • The Dodger

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    Lucky duck.
    Them are some trusting people aren't they? :XD
    More whenever you can :)
    January 26th, 2009 at 03:40am
  • The Dodger

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    Can't wait for more :D
    January 23rd, 2009 at 09:29pm
  • better.than.sex

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    hot damn! that was sad...what happened to her mom=[
    more soon!
    January 22nd, 2009 at 03:54am
  • ambeymaree

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    Thts so sad about the mother.
    I love the way its going thought.
    -subscribes-
    More soon???
    January 22nd, 2009 at 02:00am
  • A_Dirty_Syn

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    Okay your story sucks. Just kidding sister. But really it does. J/P. You can tell me who was in the ski mask, right? I mean I did live with you so I have that privledge to know. But please do me a favor and don't update again.

    Kiding. Kidding. Don't go on and report me and shit. -nervous laugh-
    January 22nd, 2009 at 12:51am
  • The Dodger

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    RUN FOREST RUUUUUUN!

    :XD
    I'm sorry. I really couldn't help myself.
    Aw but I'm really glad she got away :D
    January 21st, 2009 at 03:50am
  • Plagues Pleasure

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    interesting plot so far :D can't wait to see where you go with it
    January 20th, 2009 at 11:48pm
  • malik.

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    Wow.
    That was really sad; but at the same time, it was good. (:
    Update soon?
    January 20th, 2009 at 01:18am
  • The Dodger

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    Cry
    Oh my God. How awful.
    To lose one's mother at such a young age, God that's tragic.
    I'm curious though, at who the man in the ski mask was.
    More soon?
    January 19th, 2009 at 11:43pm