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  • weightlessoverme

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    I really liked this story. so much that i read it in like 3 days over Memorial day weekend. it was that good.
    May 31st, 2010 at 06:06am
  • Sarrawrr!:O

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    aww its overrr
    this was remarkably wonderful!
    good job
    April 2nd, 2009 at 02:19am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I absolutely love this story and so happy that Shayne and Ace made it to the altar.
    I going to miss this story, but I enjoy every one bit of it.
    April 1st, 2009 at 12:39am
  • KissAndSell

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    okay, i've been reading this slowly over the past four days and i fucking loved it. i got so into it i forgot it wasn't real and almost cried, though i do that a lot :) there should be a sequel or something about their kids or something and how they turn out... if they have the same luck as their mum and dad's... *high five* you wrote an awesome story
    March 31st, 2009 at 08:05am
  • buhnANGIE

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    Aww, I'm going to miss this story so much.
    It was amazing all the way till the end. =)<3
    March 30th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    It's over.... Its really over. *wipes tear* amazing story. Glad Shayne and Ace finally got married. I got to say this story has got to be one of my top 10 favs, and it was addictive too.

    Loved the ending it gave closure. I hope you have another story in the works so I could start reading that one. Maybe possibly a Drake and Addison spin off? Hmm...

    But still great ending to and amazing story. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
    March 29th, 2009 at 08:34am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I am sad that there is only 1 chapter left because I really enjoyed reading this story.
    I will be happen as long as Shayne and Ace end up together in the end.
    March 28th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    awww I'm sad that there is only 1 chapter left. This one was cute. I wonder how it will all end.
    March 25th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Yay!! Shayne and Ace are finally getting married.
    Hope you update soon!!
    March 22nd, 2009 at 12:06am
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    YES! FINALLY! Oh man after so long! I think I'm going to cry.

    They are getting MARRIED! Shayne and Ace are getting there Happily Ever After! I hope.

    This chapter was amazing.

    And that whole Winnie the Pooh thing, I knew there was something fishy about him.
    March 18th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • XtremeFairy

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    shayne and Ace are both stubborn , but they are meant to be together. I hope that will work everything out because they truly love each other.
    March 17th, 2009 at 11:48pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    Wow. I can't believe them. They are so fucking stubborn.
    March 17th, 2009 at 09:04pm
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    Ahh no, cliffhanger! I hope nothing happens to Shayne. Stress, anger and being pregnant is not a good thing.

    Amazing update!

    Shayne finally telling Ace she loves him and the ass says okay. Tsk tsk Ace

    I can't wait for the next one.
    March 16th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • CaesarSalad

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    Wow. I can't believe she is actually pregnant. Hopefully she tells him soon.
    March 15th, 2009 at 01:36pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can't believe that Marley and Shayne are both pregnant. I hope that Shayne tell Ace soon about the baby before he leaves. I love you story and enjoy reading each and every time. I have to say that Gavin is one of my favorite character because he like a mini version of Shayne. I think it will be really shocking if Shayne finds out she is carrying twins. Keep up the good work and hope you update soon.
    March 15th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    Aww poor Ace, only if he knew that the love of his life if expecting. Man why doesn't she just tell him and they could live happily ever after in skateboarding land, with a million skateboarding babies.

    Can't wait for the next update.
    March 13th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • RCL.

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    You should do the thing in Juno where she has a toy car on her stomach
    March 13th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    Ooh saucy Shayne. I like. Great updates. Can't wait for Marley and Vince's wedding.

    I'm anxiously waiting for Shayne and Ace to make up.
    March 12th, 2009 at 06:19am
  • Moonlight Rogue

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    hahaha Shaybe and Marley pregnant! Wow that's too cute

    Best case senerio, Ace will be happy and Shaybe finally says "I love you" . They get married and have amazing skateboarding babies.

    Worse case senerio, Ace comes back with a new girlfriend and wants nothing to do with Shayne and calls her a slut again.

    I hope is the former. Amaizing update!
    March 11th, 2009 at 06:20am
  • CaesarSalad

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    I feel so bad for Ace. Poor guy.
    March 11th, 2009 at 02:54am