Well this story was recommended to me my Snow.White.Queen which is kind of funny because I see her comment just below my own. I'm extremely glad she did tell me about it though, this story is simply excellent. I love Niki and Taylor, they're so sassy! But yet they're still there from Rhian when she needs them. Sarah is awesome too, I can just imagine her with the blue hair and everything. That's one thing you've done very well in this story, your descriptions are amazing! You write so well that it's almost as if I'm in the story with the characters, Especially the boys, you let their personalities shine through while still making them your own and adding to their traits. I love how sweet Padge is in this! He's so adorable and how long he waited for her to be ready, I think that was a nice touch, I'd imagine them all to be so kind in real life. I'm sad that there isn't a sequel to this, the ending was brilliant, but it still left space for a sequel... you should conciser doing that! Amazing story!
This story is probably the best I have ever read on Mibba. You've taken a simple plot but turned it into something amazing, the way you describe things and the way your writing flows is something I am seriously jealous of. I love the fact that it's about Padge too Amazing job :)
Oh yeah cause's she violent and definitely not in possession of a stable mind. The girl was mad.
Those were more than likely my favourite lines in the whole of this story = ) Explained me in a nutshell!! Tee hee. Loved the story ducky (especially the moments I got to beat up Padge). Sad that it's ended BUT I'm excited at the prospect of a new story. x
Loved the update ducky!! Please say I get to beat down Padge at least once more before the end of this story =D Pleeeeease!! Lol. Can't wait for more. And I'm also very happy to know you are still alive!! x
You love my story? You've got no idea how much I love yours. Okay, maybe you do since I tend to comment on this one lol but anyways...
Oh my gosh, I can't wait for that talk with Padge. Stupid boy playing hot and cold. I wonder what's going on in his head.. Anyways, can't wait to find out! I loveeeeeddd it! <3 Aj