Hellfire - Comments

Love this!!:D

*new reader :D*

I really like this story and I think it's amazing so far. Your plot line is really good too.
Please update soon.

This is really good! I love that there are vampire hunters that are vampires. haha. :D update soon!

haha that was fucking awesome! and Zacky is SOOOOO fucking hot, and sexyyy!

yea you updated!!! i've missed this story i love seeing how zacky acts and all that it's so cute how she feel around him!

i really love this story, but i cant think of anything more meaningful to say...

oh my god! i love how zacky is so wanted by other women but yet he still stays true to her...and i love his ego boost...it made him hottttt=] moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

When I first started reading, I wasn't really sure if I was going to like this story. And then it started to become unbelievably suspenseful and intense; now I think I'm in love with it! I'm glad you're trying to balance out all the doom and gloom with a cute chapter about them going shopping. Although I'm wondering if you're planning on bringing in any of the other A7X boys?

Congratulations on university! I'm in first year myself, so I know how hectic and insane it can get. Good luck! Take your time, but I would love for your next update to be soon...this is such a great story!

I have a feeling, that even if she did choke on the next mission, he'd be there to help her through it and probably blame himself for sending her back too soon. I also doubt that he'd ever let her do her first mission after near vampire death by herself. He's too protective of her...and I bet he was smirking 'cos he was reading her thoughts...
More soon? This is a really good story :D:D

i am sooooo happy you updated! i loved it! more! more! more!

i think the more he talks the more happy and alive he feels with E...maybe he is going to tell her a secret of some sort that she has yet to figure out? nice update

Fuck. I love this story
: D

i.love.it..............that's all i have to say

I love this. I can't get enough.
I love the fact that there is no dialogue what-so-ever.
It is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hope it comes soon :D

There's no speech... but I don't know if that's special. It was certainly an involved chapter, but that was fantastic. Because, who thinks without getting involved? Somehow, thoughts are much harder to follow and trace than any speech. I think her final thought at the end of the chapter was quite true, cynical, but true. Which is a shame really...
I am pleased that Zacky doesn't mind protecting her, infact one could infer that he quite enjoys it. :D:D Why won't he stay with her though?
More soon??

That was a great update. It's amazing how you wrote that entire chapter without a single line of dialog and it was still one of the most amazing chapters you've written. The whole disappearing in front of her eyes thing was pretty cool too. Can't wait for the next update!

um...all i could see is that zacky didn't say one word at all! loved the update can't wait for more!

i love it :)
Hellfires an amazin story
Can't wait fer the next chapter

okay, here it is: I love how you got the idea from hellsing, I loved that!
and I like how you're using the dialogue..
So, keep it up! please?

this story is thee best i love it !!!! zacky is so weird but he is also so sweet and loving!!! i can't wait for more!!!