I Don't Want to Cry, I Don't Want to Be Dangled Over - Comments

Audrey T.:

I actually really liked the way this started. The short sentences and the simplicity of it, it works really well.

I really really really surprisingly like this. The first part, the way it’s formatted just fits the story. It’s kind of choppy and not at all ‘beautiful’ writing but that’s the great thing about it. It’s straight and to the point but it’s interesting to read. I like the way it’s narrated, like it’s just friends talking. I like that it’s informal.

I usually hate fic in which everyone’s gay, but this is definitely an exception. The fact that it’s kind of ‘light’ but not ‘fluffy’ is great. I think that’s what I like the most.

The ending was just very cute. There’s nothing else to say because, really, it was just very adorable.

Edit: I was a bit confused by the title though. It didn't seem to fit the story.

Thank you.
Well, the title is a song, I don't really know why I put that.

I actually really liked the way this started. The short sentences and the simplicity of it, it works really well.

I really really really surprisingly like this. The first part, the way it’s formatted just fits the story. It’s kind of choppy and not at all ‘beautiful’ writing but that’s the great thing about it. It’s straight and to the point but it’s interesting to read. I like the way it’s narrated, like it’s just friends talking. I like that it’s informal.

I usually hate fic in which everyone’s gay, but this is definitely an exception. The fact that it’s kind of ‘light’ but not ‘fluffy’ is great. I think that’s what I like the most.

The ending was just very cute. There’s nothing else to say because, really, it was just very adorable.

Edit: I was a bit confused by the title though. It didn't seem to fit the story.

AWE!
I love it!

*gasps*

Oh-my-god! That's one of the most adorable things I've ever read, especially when he wrote on Spencer's belly. Aw. <3