twelve: Loved this chapter more than the others; probably because of two things: she can see again *thanks to the jerk face of a boyfriend of hers* and the sarcasm was excellent. Can't wait to read what happens next.
eleven: Loving this still. My guess is that he'll realize either during the drive to the venue or during the concert while he's playing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
ten: Still loving this. Just wishing at the moment, that you hadn't left us with a cliff-hanger. So then; why is she flatlining and is she hearing things now *her hearing the door open*? Can't wait to read the next chapter.