Only at Night - Comments

@ RachTheBat_
Yes exactly

@ Brian Haner Jr
Like wind chimes, prancing about like the little fairies they are!

@ RachTheBat_
Already been done This time, no sparkling, but they shall chime every time they smile.

@ Brian Haner Jr
Complete with people that sparkle XD

@ RachTheBat_
A certain someone would probably make a billion bucks turning that into a 4 part movie franchise complete with Mary Sue and the neighbors chihuahua that turns into a cowboy at night

@ Brian Haner Jr
I'm sure there's a whack job or two out there who would!

@ RachTheBat_
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D It's one of those ones that could go cliche and she'd be all "Be still my beating heart," but lets be honest, who would actually run into the arms of a dude that's just killed your boyfriend, no matter how abusive, and written love letters on the walls in blood. No one sane. XD

This is not crappy, not in the slightest.
It's so intense and mysterious, surrounded by an air of suspense and, and argh I can't think of the word! I'm tired, my brain is fuzzy

Seriously though, this is so good! Creepy and dark and twisted yes, but really good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You write creepy so well haha. Yes, I think the guy /being is probably insane, but he did kill her abusive pig of a boyfriend for her. What's not to love about that? That just screams romance. xD

I think the note he left for her was really beautiful, okay smearing it in her boyfriend's blood probably wasn't the best way to put his feelings across, but still beautiful. I would have chosen immortality over being a boring human any day of the week! I cottoned on to the fact that he wasn't entirely human with the whole 'jumping to buildings and not being able to go out in sunlight' thing. I found myself rooting for him and hoped he would get his wish. I don't know what that says about me though. I'm a hopeless romantic at heart!

“Forgive me my love, you’ve seen me. You know me. Never your heart shall I break, but let it still beat? You will make a pretty corpse.” So beautifully put. Yes okay, so he drained her. He didn't break her heart though.

The last line is perfect! XD because who would leave without the cat?

Very well written, so subtle and yet so detailed too.

I really like this! Another great story! :D

You should make a series out of that! ^^

i liked it

And the cat.

i absolutely loved this!
And her cat. <--- !!! wonderful.
it as amazingly scary.
you have a talent for the creepy. :)

I think the last line made the story. It was pretty good. :)

This was epically awesome, I loved it!

So did my mum, fully serious about that....

It's Amazing!
I can't get over this line : “Forgive me my love, you’ve seen me. You know me. Never your heart shall I break, but let it still beat? You will make a pretty corpse.”
It's Beautiful and horrible at the same time.
I love it.

that was beatiful! i loved it i hope you win.

I have not forgotten the review... in case you were wondering.
I just haven't had time to get it finished.
It should be up over the weekend. Hopefully.

I have a feeling that guy is truly insane. No joke. I loved the structure of this. The whole "Friday... saturday, etc." thing. It was really cool and set up a pattern that was easy to follow.

The boyfriend pissed me off. He was supposed to though so I mean... you did a good job at that. The ending surprised me when he just killed her like that. The last line made me laugh a bit. "and her cat" that was a bit of a knee slapper.

oh my gosh ! woah this was crazy ( In a good way ).......

man this is amazing!
how can it not win??

i have shivers down my spine... lol knowing me ill have nightmares tonight.. jks.

Im off to read the other entrees now! :D