I picked 4am as the title intrigued me. I'd like to say, first of all, that I loved the layout. The picture was gorgeous.
The summary was excellent too, and it's not as long and complicated as many you see.
I disliked the centred text though, and the large spaces. That's only a personal opinion, but it discouraged me.
The bolded Don't Worry is very effective, and something I loved. Great technique.
You have an excellent way of describing things; the language you use is very sophisticated and gives amazing imagery. I really, really adore your style. It's perfect for this type of fic.
You really dealt with a sensitive issue in a calm, realistic way, which made it all the more believable. It really was an amazing piece of writing, and one I would definitely recommend.
The summary was excellent too, and it's not as long and complicated as many you see.
I disliked the centred text though, and the large spaces. That's only a personal opinion, but it discouraged me.
The bolded Don't Worry is very effective, and something I loved. Great technique.
You have an excellent way of describing things; the language you use is very sophisticated and gives amazing imagery. I really, really adore your style. It's perfect for this type of fic.
You really dealt with a sensitive issue in a calm, realistic way, which made it all the more believable. It really was an amazing piece of writing, and one I would definitely recommend.