The Stars Are Fading Away - Comments

I just finished reading this story and it was really good. Your plot line was original and creative. I loved how some chapters were hilarious, while others were sad and thoughtful.

If you do write a sequel to this story, I'll be happy to read it. :)

-Michelle

i can empathise with amber. unfortunatly i wish i couldnt :) but its interesting to read luckily mine never was as bad as physical abuse. its very well written im glad to find something so interesting on mibba, ive been out of luck recently
keep up the good work im loving it <3

xXxjustjennxXx:

Ok I read this story quite a while ago and subscribed to "But the Moon Shines Brightly", and today I got an email for But the Moon Shines Brightly, so I reread this story, and that's when I realised, I know a guy named Mason....and my best friend is Jennie...Even spelled with an 'ie' rather than a 'y'. Crazy....I also know someone named Amber....and I know the Mason I know is friends with a Cody....if I meet anyone named Wren or Grace I am going to freak out haha

kk so that kinda happened to me but with twilight.
i met two girls named jess and angie.
then a guy named mike. i was like OMG.
**really random but I was looking....cause idk** ha

Ok I read this story quite a while ago and subscribed to "But the Moon Shines Brightly", and today I got an email for But the Moon Shines Brightly, so I reread this story, and that's when I realised, I know a guy named Mason....and my best friend is Jennie...Even spelled with an 'ie' rather than a 'y'. Crazy....I also know someone named Amber....and I know the Mason I know is friends with a Cody....if I meet anyone named Wren or Grace I am going to freak out haha

THIS WAS AWESOME!!! Allison, you have a MAJOR potentail as a writer, and this was a really good story. Try and get a publisher to consider turning it into a book-you've got a talent for it.

I can't believe it over, but the good thing is that she left Wren for good.
I can hardly wait for the sequel!!
Thanks for this amazing story.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW im so glad that wren is finally gone and her and mason are almost sorta kinda together!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D im really excited for the sequel you hav coming out!! :) :) i bet itll be amazing!! well im gonna go comment and suscribe to the sequel now :) Thank You for an amazing story and being put into ur Award Speech :D

<3 Megan!!!!

omg its over. i shall join you in your crying. sniff sniff tear tear. but alas! there is a sequel and im excited. wooo. and your other stories are you going to focus more on sinking in the depths? hmm well back to this story. ha. YAY wren is completely and totally gone (at least in this book) (he better stay gone unless they are beating him up) NOW though she and mason should be together. but your the writer sooo you get to decide. cant wait for the sequel and your other stories.

Aww. It's over. :(
But it was good. :D

Omg! Yay!
Your ridiculously funn to talk to too!
Wow, that sounded like a tongue twister =P
Thankks for thankking me xD
Another tongue twister, jeez.
My brains going to start hurting.
And you're welcomee! Luvved the story totally and I can't wait for the sequel!!!
:)

Awww I like it (:

And you are gonna do the sequel? Yay!

Maybe thing will be better for her now that Wren is finally gone.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i LOVE your story!!!!!
GREAT FANTASAMISTIC JOB!!
update soon :)

Wren is evil. Thank God he's finally gone.

And hopefully they hurt him (:
LOL not that I'm a violent person, but....

I'm sad that there's only one more :(
But... I dunno. I'm still sad.

yay! wren is (hopefully) gone! but now it means an ending :/ ah shucks. but yes i hope there is one more, otherwise this is a very lousy last comment. ha. so hopefully waiting for one more!

Omg!
They attacked him!!
Finally!!!!
Woooooo

so two things. ONE: pretty boring but you have two chapters named 34 so you may want to change that. TWO: oh my god that was a good chapter, mostly because im sitting here wondering..."WHAT THE HELL IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW?!"....so yea, you should update fast :]

Omg! Omg! Omg!
Wat's gonna happen?!?!
Dun..dunn..dunnnnnnnn
Can't wait for more =]

I so relieved that Amber is ok, but it makes me wonder if Wren will come back to finish her off.

Awww I loved the update!

And she should ACTUALLY break up with Wren this time. Not saying that she's gonna and then not and all that stuff.

Honestly, hasn't he hurt her enough?