I Never Said I Was Brave - Comments

OH. MY. GOD! I've honestly never read a one-shot as amazing as this! I'm here at work with people waiting in reception and I'm nearly in tears. They're hearing gasps and ooh's and aahhh's. Shit, I better shut up now - but serioualy - THIS IS AMAZING. I love you already.

He found himself there again. The same place his weary feet always carried him when he needed to get away from everything, when he needed to remember, regardless of how much it hurt.

Beautiful opening sentance. Your description and beautiful wording continued throughout the story, starting with that line. Plus, I could really relate to this line; Sometimes you just have to get away, no matter what.

He knew he was already broken beyond repair, but by keeping this to himself, by denying the gravity of what had happened, he could at least preserve some shards of his shattered heart.

The bolded part was perfect, the whole sentance was just beautiful. The reader doesn't know why yet, but you already know that something has happen, and it's made him feel broken, and alone. Just, such an emotional sentence, amazing. (:
I really like how you went into the description with her eyes, and kinda kept that going throughout the story; what with him being able to open up to her, and feeling like he could trust her already.

He had given her everything, exposed every part of himself that he hid away from the rest of the world, suppressing his fear that she would see some flaw and reject him.

You can tell how much they mean together, how they need each other, and rely on one another. It's easy to see, and you can really just tell how deep their relationship goes. Even though she loved him, and he loved her, though she had him, she still must have been unhappy. She promised she wouldn't leave, but not all promises last...

I was surprised when it said she killed herself, shot herself. The way you described him, seeing her; his angry, sadness, just overall guilt...it was heartwrenching. Things happen, things we can't change. I feel bad for both of them. It was a beautiful one-shot even if it ended like that. :D

i agree with every single comment everyone's left.. its so great i love it.. i wish i could subscribe, but that'd make no sense. well, you get my point, right?
it was beautiful!!!
you are a brilliant writer=]

That was beautiful..
It's been said so many times up before, but I could feel his emotions and everything..it was so well written!
Definitely one of the best one-shots I've ever read!
You should consider writing a full story!
Or at least write more one-shots...=P
Brilliant!!
<333

That was the best one-shot I've ever read... it was beautiful

That seriously was awsome.

However i think everything has already been said above esspecially the bit about the ending that was just so arghh i dont know the word but you know what i mean XD

Love it you should write more stories!!

That was... wow. I can't believe I've never read this before...

It starts out so beautiful already, like the description and the power of the emotion... their love was so crystal clear and bittersweet, and you HAVE to have skills to pull that off so wonderfully.

However, it was the ending that blew me away. The twist, how she said the title, and how he could never forgive her then turned away and left her alone, and... right now I'm getting goosebumps. Wow. It was wonderful. GAH. Keep repeating that word. I'm gonna go recc this on my journal... :D

awwww, thanks so much people!
i really appreciate your comments :D
*feels special*

This was so well written it was rather scary. xD
I loved it.
The emotions you put in were perfect.
I really felt for that guy.
I loved the ending too.
Very well done.

Great Job you! This was very well written. The beggining part I loved with the lyrics. This peice was really good. Your a good writer. What more can I say. You need more comments for this.

I'm not at home so I'm lacking time for proper crit, but by god, was this amazing! xDD
And I love mewithoutYou. And that song.
The emotion you packed into this was overwhelming, just great.
Once again, sorry, I know this comment blows. xD

:shock:
Twas' amazing
You should write more one shots :D

And this is the first story you ever wrote?
Coz if so...God, it was well written!

You have a gift my child. Keep writing!

Oh wow, Dear Borris that one shot was just.... wow.
I loved it, the way you showed his feelings for her.
I really loved the ending, that would have to be my favourite part. You should consider writing other one shots or even a story, i think they would be awesome. :D